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felt the absolute need to comment after reading that last note. this was NOT a boring filler chapter. your writing is too good and has proven time and again that info today is a plot of the future. also, it is great to highlight the paranoia our mc has but look at just how right he is?!?! Don't put yourself down man, this is a great and unique novel!
LOL. Was about to say, this is at most a reorganization. You have been building to this forever and there is no way you were gonna make our MC fight at the foot soldier level. There are powers beyond time and space that are gearing up for this clash, entities that have existed since before time even ticked its first second into existence. These are the...things...that our MC will be fighting because he too is now more a thing than a man. A concept almost, and it seems with our little destroyer sword, he shall try to embody truth itself! Just ranting here cause I hope you see it and know you are really, really good at writing. This novel is treat, but it is also a real masterpiece. I look forward to where ever this novel goes since you are its writer, and the entire novel is a credit to your brilliance!
I'm sorry but what? I've read to current at chapter 800ish and you are not even close to being right? like, young master what??? are you talking about the demons he killed? cause thats not face slapping, that was conquering and killing?!?! describes the Phoenix too much? I think it mentions in the beginning but like, she literally was being introduced to the story???? would you prefer no descriptions of anyone at all??? I am sorry but this review being liked and presenting an image that is a LIE, has rubbed me wrong 1000%. Its like you didn't even really read those chapters and just skimmed some? why no mention about the world building? what about literally all the other characters being introduced by chapter 50ish? Aldebaron the ruler of the forest, the forest sprite group, the obvious sin holder glutton. you literally cherry picked two events across almost 100 chapters and then went and lied about it...I don't like you doing that to a story I find entirely underrated given just how well written and though out this novel has proven to be. if you want a real review go find mine. it's from ages ago but everything I said still holds true. the story has delivered on everything I've wanted and then some. I hope people will disregard this liar and given this great novel its dues.
Author, much love. not only did the iconic first loyal mount become an awesome force of nature, but the story of Mars and all that just felt so epic! I could almost picture it like a movie. lord Simon speaking of this mythical existence as he sits on a chair, casually talking to his people, and the screen fades to black to Mars himself. as the story continues on the summon begins as simons speaks, and BAM big action moment! love it all around author
First and foremost author, this really is one of a kind in novels for me. You are, in my humble opinion, writing a story that may be held in the same regard as legendary mechanic and Lord of the mysteries by the end of it. The scale, the story, the power system, all of it flows so wonderfully and the opening 50ish chapters are horror stories done more than just right. That poor boy turned into a guardian after...well...spoilers but we all remember...truly man, I hope you are healthy, wealthy, and life treats you right, because you are a gifted story teller. Thank you for your awesome work so far!
Okay, this kind of answers that question of what happens to andar if rowan dies. The reflection can take over and make moves on his own. Also explains why that father is after the records. It and the mother of life are probably needed to resurrect something that takes primordial weapons to kill.
Yo point break! I don't know where the health break starts or ends but since you've been back I have been loving it! The world building, character introduction/growth, and just general vibe of "do as I say, because if not I'll delete you" has been an excellent return of our witch hunter! Ps. I love the pre-built understanding that in his world he is uber strong but beyond the space break he is just a really strong ant. Makes it exciting as he does things like this while making me hyped to see how he grows!