Magelo
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imagine if the chosen had access to this energy with his s rank genetics. The only issue would be how to deal with the old galaxy with all of the different things ves did, such as sh it talking the star emperor in front of people.
if he gains control of the red sea they will be doomed anyway, plus if the galaxies work like his mom explained there will probably be a trace to the milky way left for him to exploit.
sounds like a certain someones philosophy
future not looking good for you bud
yeah you guys need to implement his kinship networks right away
almost definitely
which you did a great job with
I kinda agree that the side characters haven't been fleshed out but I think that let you develop your mc and the world more
thank you for writing a great story
this approach has one fatal flaw it doesn't address a way to deal with external threats, not to mention if ves was right designer babies have close to no spirituality
that incident with the cosmopolitans might come back to bite ves
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mmm I wonder if the further you agent yourself the hard it is to aquire
oooh like the great Gatsby from bokudo stray dogs
oh pull a skipio and raid their Territory to lure them to your location
honestly it would be cool if she solidified an actual empire across the gap and then utilized the weird properties of it to somehow create a portal to the red sea