Keevens

Reading it on the first chapter is ok, but as you progress, the chapters are getting messy, math does not exist, the plot get lost, and many more things... I don't hope for anything at this novel. Whelp, i just wish it will change...😏

Errrr, i think there are lots of redundant words and sentences which make this chapter a little bit hollow.

Omo....😲😲

Should fix the wordings and grammar...

Keep up the good work and hope for the best.

Tsk!!