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DereBeyi

DereBeyi

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Hello, my name is DereBeyi. I'm a writer of a fan-fiction novel on webnovel. If my grammar is bad an apology because English is not my main language

2018-08-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to LazyPandao

    I read your review, thank you for your effort. I will try to write better with your suggestions. Also, your review was automatically deleted by webnovel, so it has nothing to do with me. There is a bad filter system that I don't understand how it works.

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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to Lucifer_777

    She is married. No NTR.

    Ch 26 Chapter 26
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    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to commander_pride_21

    First of all, I must say that Fishman karate and Fishman jujutsu are different things. Anyone can use Fishman karate, but a human using Fishman jujutsu has never been seen.

    Rayleigh was even more shocked because he had never heard anything like it before.
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    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to commander_pride_21

    Not yet, A.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
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    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to DereBeyi

    Exp

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
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    Exp

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to _Artemis69

    15-16 years before canon. Some people may not like it but there will be a lot of time skips.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to PUERKO_Senpai

    Yes, but not much.

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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Commented

    Tomorrow will be a special chapter ;)

    Ch 95 Chapter 95
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to OverdoseOnSleep

    Yes, that's true. 41 words less than the previous chapter. I can't believe you can understand that.

    "His mother? No! I created him, he will not betray me! I won't believe a word from someone like you!" Madara said angrily. He didn't want to believe he was someone else's puppet.
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Commented

    Sorry for being late. I set the timer wrong.

    Ch 82 Chapter 82
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to KissMyGloriousAxe

    No, I don't plan to turn to a multiverse. I think to finish the story after destroying the Otsutsuki clan. Maybe after I've written a few more different novels I can write a multiverse novel. The next story I'm going to write will only take place in the Naruto universe for now. A lot of things will be different from anime in my new story, unlike this story.

    Ch 73 Chapter 73
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to salmanrishi

    Japanese

    The mask had two horns on its forehead, just like the Oni depicted in Japan.
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to Deadrule_vivek

    thx good idea

    [For lemons, pat*reon.com/derebeyi.]
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to oktyart11

    Karakterlerin derinliği konusuna katılıyorum, onun sebebi yazarlık konusunda çok deneyimsiz olmam. Karakter konusunu ileride biraz da olsun iyileştirmeye çalıştım, ama temel iyi olmadığı için o kadar da etkili olmadı. Şimdi kendimi daha iyi yeni hikaye yazmak için hazır hissediyorum. Fakat tabii ki de önce bu hikayeyi bitirmek istiyorum. Tahminen 1 ay içinde bu hikayeyi bitirmiş ve yeni hikayeyi yazmaya başlamış olurum. Eleştirilerin için teşekkürler. (Açıkçası, türk birisinin hikayemi okuması beni biraz utandırıyor :d)

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to oktyart11

    Eyvallah gardeş.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to NarutoSO

    I don't remember anything like that in the anime. But as a thought, it was the 2nd Hokage who first found Hiraishin, so there may be a lot of information about this technique in Konoha. I thought Danzo could also access and use this information.

    Ch 58 Chapter 58
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to Zzz_808

    Dude, you keep asking every day. R18 chapters will only be on patreon. The reason I do it is to make money. Frankly, this makes more sense since there will not be many r18 chapters in this story. But the other story that I will write will be more r18 chapters, so only some specials r18 chapters will be exclusive to the patreon. Whatever you write, my opinion will not change.

    Ch 52 Chapter 52
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to DragonkingKyo

    Danzo was also quite powerful in Hiruzen's time. After Hiruzen, Tsunade was quickly recruited and I honestly don't think she's very good as a kage. She hasn't been in Konoha for many years, so she may not have a good relationship with the people in village, and so I think Danzo is more competent at some points in the village than her. If Tsunade openly opposes him, a civil war will most likely break out, which could be pretty bad for her. After all, Danzo is someone who manipulates people quite well.

    "Yes, he was locked in the prison but was later released from there under pressure from the public and the council." Tsunade said.
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  • DereBeyi
    DereBeyi2yr
    Replied to bazooka84

    fuu is not in harem.

    Ch 42 Chapter 42
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