really...really...really...see I can repeat stuff too.

sounds a lot like Fairytail

yes, yes, there, there

And we're off, the first idiot of this book has been introduced. how long will they last will they die a painful death or will they grow up and learn common sense. stay tuned and find out next time. p.s. 20 spirit stones, this fool dies in the first few hours that the noob barrier comes down.

Ahhh, a fellow Inquisitor I see, glad you enjoyed it.

It's a Trap!!!

a wise guild master is a wise man.

I've always liked Gu cultivation novels and this one is a great example of it's kind.

thus is what you get for thinking with your c@#k. F#&@ing d#&@head.

he's essentially the ultimate 'Tank and Spank'.

I think I could be ok here, The word “autism” means a developmental disability significantly affecting verbal and non-verbal communication and social interaction. everything that the author has dis-scribed, I think that they where going for something like introverted which is one of those traits on the autistic spectrum. Autism is just one of those points in life that shouldn't be danced around, like a room full of mouse traps, but It should be respected. with proper scheduling, routine, patients and an ordered home and workplace most people with autism even those people on the higher end of the autistic spectrum can live happy, fulfilling lives with love, family and a successful career. and if it makes anyone fell better aside from physical social interaction most autistic people are probably better than you at everything else 😆😆😆😆😝😝😝😝. ps this is not for use as a way to get people in trouble this is very simply a basic education, I myself need proper scheduling, routine, patients and an ordered home and workplace to actually cope in my life and I'm on the lower end of the spectrum. peace out and be happy, know I send you those same vibes.

Did the author really need to repet ‘tree of life,’ so many times. We get i you picked an over used piece of plot armour. Name it once, maybe at most twice when you first mention the seed. but more than that is un needed and annoying. Just call it a tree, seed, or tree seed if you really need to, we know what the tree grows into.

‘After a couple of minutes, the ‘barrier’ started to crack and no’, this sentance repeats itself about four times straight in the paragraph these comments are attached to. honestly i just assumed that it was written late at night, ive done the exact same thing before when pulling all-nighters when i just started University. but its easy to catch during a re-read or edit hence my previous comment. though re-reading it it sounded a lot more harsh than i was intending 😅😅

Ah, What is this? Repeating a paragraph, i can understand that. But to repeat the same sentence four or more times in the same paragraph is a bit much.

Hey dude we all came into this novel expecting...that ‘name,’ in here somewhere. we can at lest be glad the MC hasn’t named his beast/s that name...yet.

Amen

Your about to be trolled, trolls.

GNOMEZ RULE!!!!!!!