BattyGoody

what is up w all the ai 😐 this guy literally boosted it to the top 20 position on the rankings too istg 😐😐😐 - Also its well pretty damn bad

from the incredibles so yk (I didnt)

yupp im already used to it and all

So I'm figuring out my English isn't the best, atleast my grammar isn't so far. ill fix that starting in 2 chapters

Im a great guy what can I say (I even voted my story up) Hopefully you are understanding our dear main characters powers more and more as it goes. overall just read the story. I ain't giving u no spoilers

germans were also hella fucked as we know (so was the us of a, and basically every single country in the world)

Quick lil history fact the Japanese in war are some of the most brutal and fucked up people, far worse than the Canadians, and considering the fact that the Canadians were the reason the Geneva convention was made..they're pretty fucked.

I think you should probably wait for a little bit, with the way you're fleshing out the story, there are moments where people would really want to go a chapter ahead just to sate their feelings, and this chapter was definitely that, but I feel you should wait till this story truly gains traction, but not too late, maybe within the next 10 chapters given your update schedule so about 3 ish weeks

temu #2

pre sure it's atypical family, like the kdrama