BattyGoody

I think you should probably wait for a little bit, with the way you're fleshing out the story, there are moments where people would really want to go a chapter ahead just to sate their feelings, and this chapter was definitely that, but I feel you should wait till this story truly gains traction, but not too late, maybe within the next 10 chapters given your update schedule so about 3 ish weeks

temu #2

pre sure it's atypical family, like the kdrama

HEY I WANNA BE A LAWYER!

🥲u hate us but ty for the extra chap

right, but it's an independent movie, so not a commercial film and isn't open to anywhere near as many cinemas as most films.

just one thing, Toronto is in Ontario.... Ontario's the province, Toronto's the city. be like one moment he's in Montreal, and the next he's in Toronto, that makes a little bit more sense

Bru mine was elementary k-8, high school 9-12

only thought I have here was that Rickard wasn't very honorable....but hey there's no need to read too deep into a fanfic right? Nice work tho author 😎 (might js use this minecraft idea of urs one day)

bro fought the queen of england