Lorenzo_Kim
Hello! In December this year, I will be writing my first ever Novel titled “Genesis of Water “ it will be centered around the water element and how powerful it is in the right hands. Thank you!
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Lorenzo_Kim3mthCommentedOfc idc about this novel. Jks pls both of u kiss already
"No, not at all. It is a completely dry relationship where each of our goals are obvious."- Lorenzo_Kim6mthReplied to Cultivation81741
your face is
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All Becus u CANT get irina but nah supposedly has an elven wife but u cant
Josh chewed on his steak with a little more force than necessary as a dark expression appeared on his face. "Why do all of you have everything I want, yet I have nothing? All of you deserve to die!" - Lorenzo_Kim10mthCommentedCh 802 And He Has an Adorable Daughter
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Soo gross
The shaking fat was unpleasant to the eye and made many new customers watch with fright. The enjoyment and happiness on their faces, though, seemed to have been amplified by their fat mugs. The live commercial of their faces was making the new ones wonder what food was making them act like this. They couldn't help ordering one despite the high price. Many new consumers had stayed because of them. - Lorenzo_Kim10mthCommented
I actualy like the origin story. NOOO don’ remove it
Mag interrupted. "Stop. I don't want to hear it. I know these are all good stuff. You just want to sell them at a higher price. Just give me a number." He had to open his restaurant in a moment, and didn't have time to listen to the system's lengthy spiel. - Lorenzo_Kim10mthCommented
She’s a little miser
Mag put the money in the drawer. Amy went back to counting the coins behind the counter after she said hi to the customers. She really loved counting coins. - Lorenzo_Kim10mthCommented
CUUUUTEEE
"Then I'll start eating now." Amy happily took back her spoon, spooned another spoonful, and looked at the rice solemnly. "I'm sorry, rainbow, but I have to eat you now." - Lorenzo_Kim10mthPosted
This novel idk why it is popular. It’ literally just a novel describing sex and making women do shit with him every 5-10 chapters but hey? If you guys are all about h0rNy women getting together w MC then this novel would be 5stars for u. For me I want a story with proper depth so this is the lowest it can ever get for me
- Lorenzo_Kim10mthPosted
I believe my review is very fair. Having read a bit into the story by now, I am disappointed with the fight scenes and thought process of the characters The three biggest cons I have with this story is: 1. MC gets the things he needs too easily and too conveniently. It always happens before a big fight or a big transaction 2. The other characters are literally NPCS and I mean that in the most literal sense. They do not question their lord or anything. It just feels like a kingdom building story but with no soul. Just the MC is cognitive sorta 3. Information about things just drop out of nowhere - no leading context. And if you know a good story, you should know that it is better “to show and not tell”. I just feel like we’re constantly being introduced a new information but it just doesn’t feel very succinct - just so jarring and abrupt
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I just find this comment si stupid
[Potential: White Silver-Tier Intermediate Grade] - Lorenzo_Kim11mthReplied to Abhishek_BasnetCh 1 Foreigners
- Lorenzo_Kim1yrPosted
If you’re lookoing for a great novel, go read LORD OF THE MYSTERIES AND THEN THIS BOOK. BOTH ARE MASTER PIECES I TELL YOU MASTER PIECES OF NOVELS. THE BOOK PLOT CHARACTERS EVERYTHING IS SO INCREDIBLE. EVERY SIDE CHARACTER HAS AN ARC THAT LINKS WITH THE MAIN MC AND THEY R SO SO SO SO RESOURCEFUL IN THIS BARREN WORLD BUT ALSO SO MAGICAL
- Lorenzo_Kim1yrCommentedCh 1 Foreigners
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