Silver_Diamond
I love reincarnation and transmigration novels đ„°. Lemme know if u spot a good one!
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This story has a really nice plot and amazing plot. There are some scenes that fail to create the right ambiance; like in parts where everyone is serious and suddenly the couple gets lovey dovey thus coming off cringey (maybe its just me). Nonetheless I really enjoyed most of the familyâs interactions, especially the snu snu parts. Another thing Iâd like to point out is that character that always swears. Honestly, I get it there is a person like that in real life but they dont just use one swear word. I did notice some readers pointing it out and the author just says its his âcharacterâ. The point is this character has so much potential to be liked by many readers but because of the poor choice of words we tend to just censore his lines and regard it as meaningless. No importance. Really, just adding different cuss words can at least make him look more âintelligentâ (more swear vocab). Maybe that way weâll find him a bit more likable and at least entertaining. Besides that, great story, great characters. Keep up the good work author.
Yes bake that bun. We need fluffy scenes
Uhmm whoâs holding her? Isnt this a phone conversation ? đł
I think instead of just using fck. You can use other swear words, its just getting repetitive. maybe sht, bloOdy hell and Etc. I still love this story though hahaha. Just a lil tip to make Jamesons character a bit more realistic and likable.
Ohhh I support this ship!