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The story is off to a good start but can you maybe extend the chapters or maybe kinda speed it up a little most of this stuff could have been worked into the first four chapters I know you wanted some world building and background just some of this stuff seem too spaced out but if you continue like this it's fine too
Please continue this story I read the first chapter now I kinda want to know what happens next. Random emojis ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฑ๐๐๐คฃ๐ฅณ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅบ๐คข๐ญ๐คฎ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐๐ฅณ๐๐๐ฃ๐๐ฒ๐๐ช๐๐๐คข๐คฏ๐ฉ๐๐๐ช๐ฅฑ
I like the story overall but can the MC stop being a fucking idiot simp you travel to the DC universe with the inheritance of a golden dragon and you ***** and moan for 8 months he clearly know the DC universe is very dangerous and the first thing you do is tell Batman your identity then take a bullet for Harley even though he barely knows how to use his power at all it's just fucking stupid