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once upon a time, in another world line...
I recommend editing it a second time. there is at least one error every other paragraph :)
question words like "when" should be paired with a question mark at the end of the phrase.
second sentence is a fragment missing a subject.
last sentence is a sentence fragment, you started with "while", so after that phrase, add a comma and then a second phrase to complete the thought.
check ur verb tenses here. "outcasted" and such. The use of orchestrated may be incorrect here without proper context.
when you have dialogue that ends in a period, the next sentence should be a new paragraph.
At some point in the marriage, you just accept everything your husband does...
oh my god that's halfway to hand holding
what a tsundere
cooking for the wife?
let go of wifey! double husband battle for KDJ?!
TIME FOR SOME LOVIN' MCLOVIN' OLDER BROTHER ;D
does it have the same effect as calling him Oppa?
protect the wife!!
protect the wife!!
being stared at by a Loli demon
Uriel?!?!
happy world where jonghyuk and dokja are friends? yes!!