SilverIncorperated
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Overall a very good and well-made book that could be published. The one issue that I saw at the start was long chapters lead to unstable releases, but the later chapters are shorter making it more viable. It has great development but I feel like there are to make characters and things to keep track of (I don't know how to rectify that now).
I've already re-read this many times. don't mind doing it again