The small POV switch of what the girl is thinking really pulls you out of the story. We don't need to know what she is thinking right at that moment. Leave a little mystery. If you are going to do a POV switch then do it fully like you did with Gangster Boss or Kei.

I think you have the record for using Azure so many times in a single chapter.

One of the dumbest chapters I have ever read. I almost dropped the story.

In a previous review I criticized the description of the story since it was not very good. However, since then the author has changed the description to be much better. I have deleted my previous review.

Well it worked. Now your Story description is really good.

The story is really good so far, and so much better then 99% of stories on this site. Its always weird seeing garbage novels highly rated, while good novels have poorer ratings.

He says that his skin is white in like the second chapter.

I really like all the med knowledge.

This novel needs to have its Synopsis rewritten, and to add a bunch of Tags. This novel would be in the top 10 easy if it had a better Synopsis. Its nothing like I thought it would be.

Its rare in these novels where the MCs power and luck is explained well. Makes sense why the MC is OP when its really a Top Cultivator that did it to himself to escape death.

I don't understand who mass disliked this novel to give it a rating of 4.7. Compared to the other top novels this should be rated 4.9/5.0. It is the best novel on this site. I should know, I have read most of it.

I just see Ben and his Cuz looking like Italian Goombas with spray tans and crazy hair. Its makes it all the funnier.

I don't even know what to say. These first few chapters are trash.

This is the best Webnovel on this site. I really do not understand how other stories are higher ranked. This should be number 1!!! If you have any sense you would stop reading this review and spend the next couple days reading this novel.

When I first saw this novel I could not get past the first couple chapters, and I dropped it. I was not until a year later that I checked out the novel again and was surprised at how the author cleaned up a lot of the grammar. The story got much better and before I know it I was 100 chapters in. Give the novel a try, it really picks up around chapter 20.

Purple Days, the Game of Thrones Fanfic?

Bumped on(INTO) Nial. EDIT

"see if there was nothing(ANYTHING) worth talking" EDIT

In a previous chapter he said that he was 36, but here he said he was 31. EDIT!

Yeah, this needs a rewrite. Really confusing. The AN at the end helped a bit though.