guys... I just realised something. if the body were to be animated, the shoulder would always complain why he always get shot. the shoulder:

isn't the paragraph says that a 1 percent event happened 100 times or a thousand times, didn't say consecutive or what time frame but maybe it means his luck influence things that should have a less probability event happen more than it should.

my thoughts exactly

I also read that.... but it's been too long. I kinda thought this was a rewrite, or is it? i remember it also has a developer in the tittle...hmmm. but whatever.

wouldn't hard core dark souls (and other games like this) gamers love if they can parry everything IRL? and every (maybe jot all) parry stuns the enemy?

Maybe the author is a male. I mean would you rather have stinky and naughty little brother than cute and naughty little sister? Men of culture knows best!

I mean the energy is getting eaten by the worm.

they are on the deck of the boat not in a corridor or hallway or room so the spiritual energy looks endless. On the deck the are is moving so does the energy, just think that the energy is getting eating like a worm in the soil it the energy in the previous are is missing but since there are moving forward there are still energy Available.

umm hairs are so thin right? won't the bleeding also be smaller right?

Umilia...Sus Sounds like Emilia from a certain isekai.

First of all, I am not a pro at making reviews 2nd It's my opinion and what I think about it. 3rd I don't care if anyone will be offended by this. and 4th I read up to chapter 9 The story has good potential but grammar has problems, the systems (power level, the name color) is not good (maybe gets better later), plot armor is thick, I think the MC is dumb and contradicts himself. Over all good but the mc to cliche for me and the grammar and systems need polishing.

should have used level system, not color. I mean if based on the player like orange but if it's too strong black? but what if the player is so strong? there will be no uniform color unless everyone has the same power level.

strikeable slash?....um you could have use easy and common word for skills like power strike, strong slash, or even just slash because they are still low level. strikeable is what can I say.. not are really good sounding skill.

man use Grammarly and you will not have grammar mistakes. Promise! I use Grammarly on my phone and it's really easy and effective!

but it is a female... it should be Queen not King

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lol! Why did I not think of that?🤣🤣🤣

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