Richardew23

Overall an amazing story. I love the world-building in it and I love the mc powers. It's probably going to suck tho when he becomes a slave. Gonna a be a drop for me if he doesn't find a way to exploit the ability.

It's a good start. I can tell that the beginning will be a little slow, but as soon as he starts learning about his magic it will start to pick up.

The story is starting out fine, but in my opinion the chapters are way to short. All of the chapters could be merged together into 1 decently sized one, rather than having these small chapters.