Arxt

An update, the chapter that was problematic is corrected

A good story, a great idea and a relatively stable world and character development. The greatest issue is the guessing game in figuring out who is the character they are talking about. The latest chapters being especially worse than before. a character named Javier appears out of thin air and becomes the main character.

reviewing for the sake of reviewing for the sake of fast pass

reviewing for the sake of reviewing for the sake of fast pass

reviewing for the sake of reviewing for the sake of fast pass

reviewing for the sake of reviewing for the sake of fast pass

reviewing for the sake of reviewing for the sake of fast pass

reviewing for the sake of reviewing for the sake of fast pass

It is a good story with quite a good focus on development. However a particular lack in noun/gender usage for the main character is a bit troubling.

Although the story is intriguing, the character development is a bit too fast. Furthermore the extreme amounts of missing content for each chapter/sub-chapter makes reading the story impossible. The missing chapters are too much, such that I decided to make a review of it