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this entire Naruto arc is boring and really cringe. As some people pointed out before MC seems like a Chinese character, blaming everyone for his problems's.

this entire chapter was annoying with mc personality being emo/brooding and cringe lol

thanks for the chapter!

really good story! Hope you have more chapters for us in the future

Hi, I've been following you since the first few chapters of the trials: path to godhood, I even remember your second fic in the slash dog/DXD world. It's a pity that you decided to stop writing fanfictions but it's understandable. Hope everything goes well in this new phase of your life!

It was good in the first 10 chapters or so, but the author forced a really bad plot and chapters 12 and 13 just killed my interest in this fic. Besides the forced plot a lot of characters from asoiaf are either one dimensional or behaving like OOCs.

A really well written book with interesting plot and magic/supernatural background. Looking forward for the next chapter!

I usually dislike writing reviews here, but I think most people commenting are really unfair . I just finished chapter 22 now and, till this very moment, there's no cuckoldry or any kind of sharing between the mc and another male . The only smut chapter that we had was closer to netori than anything. Besides that, I'm really enjoying the slow development here, hoping for more chapters

Ainda não terminei de ler mas tô gostando da história. Só por escrever em português tbm já merece no mínimo 4 estrelas haha.

I think his mother is either DJ or Lynne