我在人间立地成仙

ChatGPT is unreliable as it has a cap for both input & output. So unless you’re willing to be careful & only translate one section of a chapter at a time you will end up with an inaccurate translation as it summarizes & cuts out content in order to not exceed the output cap. Even if you’re careful it can still make mistakes. Personally I use google translate for Raws as while it’s not as good as ChatGPT in providing a natural sounding translation, it’s so much more accurate. You don’t have to worry about google translate leaving parts of the chapter out or summarizing sections.

So we’re continuing to nerf the system that hasn’t even been properly used. First he wasn’t getting 10x boosts despite Nadia getting the best resources & training (she was strong while he was still a weak chicken), second just even approaching Nadia was made incredibly dangerous so giving her resources would be hard, & now apparently he can’t even give them anymore to her because she would report him. What’s the point of a 10x binding system if it only shows up once in a blue moon? It seems like the author wants to get rid of the system. Based on the description the MC should have been getting random boosts as Nadia got stronger & consumed rare resources but that hasn’t happened. Instead he only got a boost when she unlocked her eye ability & when she used the MC’s elixir.

So we’re switching to a 10x gift system? Despite Nadia getting the best resources & training, the MC is getting zero boosts. It appears he’ll only get 10x boosts when he gifts her something or she unlocks an inherent ability.

I’m pretty sure the author isn’t following their system rule, haha. MC will only grow when the author wants them to regardless of how much his sister is growing. They seem to have decided to switch to a giving system where the MC only grows when he gives Nadia something (such as the elixir). The author has nerfed their system from the very start. Otherwise the MC should have been getting multiple random 10x boosts. Nadia after all is getting the very best resources & training.

Or the MC could actually receive the 10x boost from Nadia like he’s suppose to. She’s being fed the best resources & given the best training but only when he gave her the elixir did he receive the 10x boost? That’s not how the system was described. This isn’t a 10x return for everything you give away system. It’s a 10x system for every milestone & improvement in strength by the target system. The MC should be getting boosts at random times whenever the clan gives Nadia rare resources similiar to the elixir or when she hits milestones.

Good! I hate MCs who act like saints & forgive people who tried to kill them. Murderers should never be spared.

Obviously because the novel described her looks & temperament well. If a character has some distinguishing features then you might recognize them.

Just hand wave it away as part of him keeping a low-profile & just enjoying life as a lazy prince. Maybe cultivating as a martial artist would have made people take notice of him & consider him a potential threat while not cultivating has labeled him as a waste & non-threat.

To add on to this, I hope Atticus doesn’t make this mistake again in future chapters & actually takes things seriously. If he continues to play around & lose when he should win then I might just drop the book as it’s incredibly frustrating to read when the OP MC loses because of his stupidity or arrogance. If the MC loses a fight of competition it should be because of other factors & not because the MC who is supposed to be very intelligent keeps make stupid mistakes.

This chapter made me hate Atticus. He should have been able to easily win but he fooled around & didn’t take it seriously (despite his grandfather’s order). Even when he realized he screwed up & wasted half the test in an illusion (didn’t use what he was taught), he still decided to play around with Kael when it would take a second for him to win. This was an incredibly disappointing read. It started frustratingly & ended even more so. Previously he said he learned his lesson & that there was no point in hiding his power since his enemies were already sending grandmasters to kill children. The point of hiding your power is so they don’t take you seriously & don’t send peak powerhouses to kill you early but they are already doing that. However in this test, Atticus tries to hide his power as if he forgot this lesson & then is forced to reveal a lot of it anyway when he realizes his screw up & has to catch up. Atticus is like an Olympic athlete who was guaranteed to win a gold medal but because of his arrogance & stupidity ends up with a silver & he only got that silver medal because his worst performance is still better than many’s best performance.

How convenient that he can use his blood to giver her back most of her power right away… No need to spend 7 months powering her up.

She lived 18+ years as a human & only 7 months as a zombie. Also let’s not forget that zombies have issues such as blindness, infertility, a corpse body, etc. It makes zero sense for her to prefer being a zombie over STAYING ALIVE & getting a superpower. She really never wants to have kids?

Seriously it makes no sense to turn his lover into a zombie, especially when he’s no longer attracted to the undead. He had an excuse before because of the talent but he doesn’t anymore now. It also makes no sense for her to want to become a zombie when she can acquire a superpower. You’re telling me she WANTS to die & possibly lose her sentience? Also as an undead she won’t be able to become pregnant so becoming a zombie means she can never have kids. This is so irrational. I have no clue why the author keeps insisting on this. It’s entirely too forced.

Guess we’re going to ignore that this is her dying with a real chance of her losing her sentience. Also as a zombie she won’t be able to get pregnant & have children. It makes zero sense for her not to want to pursue the path of getting superpowers instead of becoming a zombie. Once again this is all too convenient for the MC where his lover makes irrational choices that benefit him. I very much hope that when he does the full dive, she doesn’t once again become a zombie because that would just be too sad. Anyways this wish fulfillment stuff doesn’t help the story. Stop having everything work out so conveniently for the MC. It’s more interesting when he has to struggle & figure out how to solve the problem. He can literally repeat it again & again until he finds a solution. There’s no need to hand everything to him.

For anyone wondering why he would do this, it’s because he feels he owes the previous owner of the body since he’s now taken it over. Also, as the new owner he’s already inherited the hatred. These enemies won’t stop targeting him. As for right and wrong? It’s already a question whether he still has such feelings. For someone of his power such concerns are meaningless. This is a world where might makes right. Whatever he wants to do, he can do. Now for why he just doesn’t rewrite reality… Probably because he wants to have fun. Life would be boring if he just does everything with the snap of his fingers. He’s all powerful so he can do whatever he want. At the end of the day, he can always rewrite reality after he has had his fun.

Why is it that Wrath constantly makes mistakes & usually only makes the situation worse? Whether it’s the betrayal in the beginning, the Mage ID card that was never delivered (she never verified it despite paying a high price), or killing the decoy King she constantly screws up. I hope the author will make her more competent & intelligent going forward. It’s getting tiresome as it seems like anytime Wrath shows up she’s going to screw something up.

Unlikely as it seems he was only reborn due to the prototype card soaked in his blood. Now as for why the card had actual power we can only assume it was due to the “mystery” ceremony they were conducting.

Well it makes sense that an orphan with no backing will want to stay anonymous otherwise they’ll be at the mercy of others once discovered. Plenty of bad people would want to grab him for their own use. Just getting him to spill the beans on how he leveled up so fast is extremely valuable information or got such a strong skill. He didn’t have a choice when it came to the spell being flashy as it fit his luck skill too well. Also makes things more interesting to have some flaws that others in the story can start investigating.

The stranger can only see his anonymous forum name. They dont know who he is (same thing with his support partner). The police officer was unavoidable unless he wanted to just let a criminal who tried to break into his house get away. The officer also mistook him as someone from a previous batch of new players so to him the MC is a slow leveler who is below average. This means he’s still low-key as his combat power was only seen by this ONE cop & that cop is oblivious. Its actually good for the story that the MC has some flaws & that he’s not able to perfectly hide. Flaws make things more interesting. He only won’t be low key if the public becomes aware of his achievements (knowing his real name).