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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

the storyline is unexpected, I'm sure I will enjoy this. thank you author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

it's fun, it's exciting, mysterious and I want more. I can't wait to see how this story develops. the 2nd and 3rd chapters were a bit fast paced but I hope it slows down a bit in the later chapter. I'm just super excited soi had to review this now before I forget👍👍👍

I think she's more realistic this way

I agree. thanks for the edit suggestions. all have been updated.🙂

I just read the first two chapters and I'm hooked. the first chapter was unexpected and moving. I also like the author's description of the world and I look forward to more chapters👍👍👍

I like the characters description and the plot twist. the prologue and 1st chapters had me invested. I had to find out what happened. excellent world development 👍👍👍

This is my first 5. the story is not draggy so far. it has a steady pace, the storyline has alot of promise. I'm looking forward to this adventure👍👍👍

I'm intrigued!!!