PrimordialVampire
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PrimordialVampire2yrCommentedCh 52 Chapter – 52 (Lux Cycle)- PrimordialVampire2yrCommented
sorry mate i'm not from USA so i'm not really in tune with big criminals in your country...great story so far and don't worry people will come read your story and someone will know. that "mason" was it Charles Mason???
I'm kinda sad nobody commented about the references I made to IRL people. I need comments, feedback and interaction with the readers of else all the effort I put into writing is pretty much for nothing, since I write for you guys :'c - PrimordialVampire2yrCommentedCh 57 Chapter 57
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does nobody knows that tesla for funding people inventions asked for said inventions to pe patented in his name????
And during this whole mess, my son decided to go and recruit Nikola Tesla out of nowhere as his bishop. He said that it was because he heard me talk about the man's brilliant mind even if he was somewhat damaged as a person due to his life. Kal thought he could become something akin to his own Da Vinci since we could help him recover, mind, body and soul, while also giving him a lot of freedom to create and funding/resources to do so. - PrimordialVampire2yrCommented
oooooo nekomata incoming????
The fact he never came to the underworld anymore was starting to worry many devils, and the Asgardians loved to rub it in our faces since he kept visiting them every now and then. It was actually the only place where you could see him aside from Kyoto where he would sometime visit the Yokai leader after giving her a set of Kyubi talismans. That's right, she could now reincarnate humans in satan blessed Kyubi. - PrimordialVampire2yrReplied to shypunk
someone effing did it...the disrespect on this one [img=update]
"I don't need any excuses. Mr. Mason. In the end, you raised your Wand against fellow Students while you came out unharmed. You will spend every Friday afternoon in Detention with me for the rest of the year! Good day, Mr. Mason." decided Snape with a strange glint inside his eyes. - PrimordialVampire2yrCommentedCh 64 Mana Core
- PrimordialVampire2yrCommented"Oh, he needs to die then. I'll get my gun."
- PrimordialVampire2yrReplied to Plug_O_Stien
he is right tho...i hate when authors give their Mc's big backgrounds like military and old age and forget about it in a few chps...your MC besides being disciplinated when he trains , he is a big fucking kid that is to arogant and hates eveyone.
Rex " Scyther use Knight slash repeatedly at full speed, spam that shit." he said vulgarly, Scyther didn't understand the terminology but understood the meaning and began to charge up big amounts of dark energy in its scythes and charged at the swaying Onix, Brock tried to order it to move away but Onix was too injured and its speed was impaired, under the immense anger Brock stood there unable to think of a solution, he finally realised what was happening right as Scyther made impact. The repeated use of night slash and the consecutive successful crits completely obliterated the Onix sending it flying through the Gym wall and into the garden behind the gym. Brock was aghast at the result and rushed to check that Onix was alright, luckily Onix had monstrous defence so he was mostly fine though ha a good couple of days would be needed to heal up. Brock by now was feeling very disappointed in himself for falling into Rex's trap so easily. he could only sigh in disappointment. Rex made his way over and extended his hand. He really didn't like Brock, Ash or misty, so he just wanted to leave, his first battle was almost a loss and that really made him open his eyes. sure his pokemon are stronger than their peers and sure he had details on training and diets but knowledge and experience in battle were very scarce, he really started to appreciate the value of the gyms. - PrimordialVampire2yrCommented"It works wonders," He said. "It instills both discipline and a sense of measure. Very effective."
- PrimordialVampire2yrCommented"Hah? If Damien could take your arm then I can take your life!"
- PrimordialVampire2yrCommentedCh 54 Log Out
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i'll come back at ch100 when the story will fking start to see MC write stories get into trouble get out with plot armour don't lvl up cause man has to write a story , than get again and again into trouble , get out with plot armour and don't lvl up...uhhh i feel like i already read the story:)))
Ch 29 ‘Malakai’ makes his appearance - PrimordialVampire2yrReplied to FanHarem
all that hype for those 2 right and left arms spirit bones for nothing...i was wondering why you were pushing so much for "waiting" and "no chance" to fuse with them.
'I'll miss you, my left arm,' Ja Sun sighed internally as Ground Devil absolutely shredded that small sweetheart that once belonged to Ja Sun. - PrimordialVampire2yrReplied to FanHarem
ofcourse it matters... he likes to fight male so with just one arm he is quite restricted...he could have gotten enything from spatial storage to trow but no let's trow the arm...
'I'll miss you, my left arm,' Ja Sun sighed internally as Ground Devil absolutely shredded that small sweetheart that once belonged to Ja Sun. - PrimordialVampire2yrReplied to FanHarem
make him whole f..ker...
'I'll miss you, my left arm,' Ja Sun sighed internally as Ground Devil absolutely shredded that small sweetheart that once belonged to Ja Sun.