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Cloudshacker2yrReplied to CloakedWillowthe raw has been taken down. will try and find another site ^^
And Su Mu had brought back 10,000 kilograms of grain, enough to support more than 500 people for a year's rations.- Cloudshacker2yrReplied to AmonRas
yup 100% right
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If you are interested in the raws : http://www.ffxs8.com/trxs/14167.html
And Su Mu had brought back 10,000 kilograms of grain, enough to support more than 500 people for a year's rations. - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to Sin_of_GREED
the raw of the novel
[Note: Activate unique SSS-grade talent, Heaven Rewards Diligence!] - Cloudshacker2yrCommented
The function of potential points is to increase the level of the skills that Su Mu possesses! It is equivalent to the skill points obtained by players in the games he played in his previous life! But... this is no ordinary game! In the communication with Luo Qianqian, Su Mu remembered that Luo Qianqian once mentioned that not only the P as a soldier has no skill points, but even generals and players also have no skill points! Whether it is a soldier of his type P, or a general or a player, after obtaining a skill, the proficiency can only be improved through continuous use. After reaching a certain proficiency, the skill level can be improved. Other than that, it's just a matter of chance. Now, this setting has been broken by Su Mu! "Could it be... that this is the golden finger that I brought with me?" Sauce : original
"Attribute points... I can freely choose to add a certain attribute. This reward is heaven-defying!" - Cloudshacker2yrPosted
Well my firts review on this website. I actually liked the original of the book and was immensely dissapointed by the work of the "translator". I mean if you are "translating" a novel, I don't think that you should keep adding random ideas that go through your head especially when those have nothing to do with the original plot or don't help it in other ways. I wouldn't be complaining if it added to it but it obviously detracts ... and a lot. You just added plot holes after plot holes. Like the random ass system, the spatial ring, the knight change order, the interactions between the lord and the mc etc ... and that is just skimming through the negative changes. I still decided to add 3 stars for the story character and world background since those have nothing to do with the shoddy translation. as for the update stability i marked it for this website. Have a nice day raw : http://www.ffxs8.com/trxs/14167.html
- Cloudshacker2yrReplied to Sin_of_GREED
you know whats funny .... the systel isn't actually from the author of the original .... it was added in by the translator. no idea about his nationality though. But well your point right there is now completely invalid when it comes to this particular novel
[Note: Activate unique SSS-grade talent, Heaven Rewards Diligence!] - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to HellsHero
doesn t exist added by translator
He had no idea how to transfer to the special units! - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to Darkoneko
just to let you know just in case. the ring and the knight's order where added in by the translator .... not the author. the original doesn t have those
And Su Mu had brought back 10,000 kilograms of grain, enough to support more than 500 people for a year's rations. - Cloudshacker2yrCommented
the translator actually added some plot that he forgot about .... the original novel didn t have that or the knight thing
In the end, with so much food and equipment, Su Mu could only leave them here to be burned. - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to RightLeaningRLL
yea you are right ^^ just that when it was said i assumed there was some sort of connection between the realism and the fact it'll fuse. Just me making hypothesis sorry XD
As long as players wanted to bring this equipment back to the real world, they could just bind it with blood. - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to Grimsight
it was also destroyed in previous fight
When the process of strengthening ended, the cloth armor on Su Mu's body had been replaced with leather armor capable of better defense. After leaving the Black Dragon Blade outside the barracks, there was something new in his previously empty hands. It was a black sturdy wooden bow! - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to RightLeaningRLL
it was said at some point that that world and the original fused or something.
As long as players wanted to bring this equipment back to the real world, they could just bind it with blood. - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to Cloudshacker
do you mean issues like thinking that working towards something that i want is "slaving away for someone in the hopes of becoming someone significant"? Naa i'm good, i have a life after all
However, Su Mu did not think so. His gaze became fiery. "If I can break through the limits of the military..." - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to SpoiledSecrets
XD the wording is old sure ... but do you know what it actually means? it means nationality. yea i know complicated words
Beyond Level 20, he could undergo a fourth job change and shift his unit to 'Elite Soldier'. - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to SpoiledSecrets
and you are a subject of your nation LOL
Beyond Level 20, he could undergo a fourth job change and shift his unit to 'Elite Soldier'. - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to Seikatsu
?
However, Su Mu did not think so. His gaze became fiery. "If I can break through the limits of the military..." - Cloudshacker2yrReplied to Laron_Shawn
maybe except the fact that he is actually commenting on the translation of a CHINESE novel ? generalising ain't good sure but come on did you have to jump out of the woodwork to yell "racist!" ?
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in shorter terms the info is as such : there are lords the lord starts with 10 refugees he is an npc/person/whatever (doesn t really say he is a farmer or anything) with this info why do you believe he should be a submissive dog ?
Su Mu muttered in his heart. Looking at the pitiful expression of the cute girl in front of him, he couldn't help but laugh. "What benefits does joining Chang'an Village have for me?"