Review Detail of Cloudshacker in I Become An NPC That Can Do Infinite Job Changes

Well my firts review on this website. I actually liked the original of the book and was immensely dissapointed by the work of the "translator". I mean if you are "translating" a novel, I don't think that you should keep adding random ideas that go through your head especially when those have nothing to do with the original plot or don't help it in other ways. I wouldn't be complaining if it added to it but it obviously detracts ... and a lot. You just added plot holes after plot holes. Like the random ass system, the spatial ring, the knight change order, the interactions between the lord and the mc etc ... and that is just skimming through the negative changes. I still decided to add 3 stars for the story character and world background since those have nothing to do with the shoddy translation. as for the update stability i marked it for this website. Have a nice day raw : http://www.ffxs8.com/trxs/14167.html