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ManifestRegret8mthReplied to PyrhoicBeggars can't be choosers, when Orochimaru defects it would be seen as weakness and a sign of opportunity for Konoha's enemies. Which is basically everyone. Now no matter how much Danzo wants to get rid of the Uchiha he has to wait till Konoha recovers and strenghtens itself. A civil war when you are already down might not be the end of Konoha's existence but it definitely will be the end of their dominance.
In short, if the village was uncomfortable, the Uchiha clan would prosper.- ManifestRegret10mthReplied to Zetsway
This truly is an ATG fic, mc is on the road to become Scum Che. Author made the MC have flaws that were cringe but realistic enough which he overcame through the support of his wives. Now that he is confident he is willing to throw it all away just for some crush he had from a webnovel and because the character is pretty.As you said the downfall of this story is just sad.
Ch 36 XXXVI - ManifestRegret10mthCommented
In chinese its dage, da for big and ge is short version of gege which is brother.
'Big Brother Long just sounds so wrong to me… if I hear it a third time, I'll yeet myself out of here.' Rokas sighed. "Please, if you're going to call me big brother, use my first name instead." - ManifestRegret11mthReplied to ZonicZ
This is literally how it is according to the Bible. Archangels in Dante's Inferno for example were merely messengers of God.
Archangel = Peak Low Rank - ManifestRegret11mthCommented
Feranmuts is a catch all term for all deities and god like beings not necessarily having to be from Yan.
Texas went wide eyed and gasped. "Even more so than the greatest arts user in recorded history?" She was simply dumbfounded. "Yeah, that kid has a similar feel to the Feranmuts. The gods of Yan from ancient times." - ManifestRegret11mthCommented
Laterano is based on Vatican City with influences from Switzerland
Victoria, the Britain of Terra, Laterano, was like the US. But not because it's a melting pot of culture or anything. They just really love guns, their locals were angels with guns. Kazdel is an unstable country where Sarkaz, the quintessential demons live. - ManifestRegret1yrReplied to Depressed_Shovel
burning temples
It wasn't that Gilgamesh was weak, not by any stretch of the imagination. It was a thing of compatibility, possessing B - A+ Ranked Divinity would usually be a huge cheat against anything and everything... except, well, Oda Nobunaga who held the Anti Divine property, this 'cheat' turned into a weakness in front of her. Only empowering her and making him weak instead. - ManifestRegret1yrReplied to Mobius_5trip
man said just a kid and then proceeded to say ayaka 💀
The Gliding Champion of Mondstadt, the best Outrider in Mondstadt because she's practically the only one left, the F-tier character yet S-tier waifu, Outrider Amber. - ManifestRegret1yrCommented
There is no need to rush because it isn't as if this part is bad. Current pacing actually feels like a story. There are stories where it is just the MC constantly doing this or that which just feels like a more elaborate diary. Interactions don't need to have importance. Some authors rush through it to progress the story which makes it bland. I really enjoy your interactions because it enriches the story and it's noticeable. Sorry if reading this was messy but in general I just wanted to say your story feels whole. You didn't sacrifice one to expand in another so everything feels balanced.
- Would you prefer an accelerated plot, until Magnus meets his love interest? Or would you like to continue with the slow development? - ManifestRegret1yrCommented
Driving force plot surrounded by fluff. Up to you what kind of ratio you want it in.
- Would you guys enjoy a relentless assault of fluff with some plot? Or much more plot going on with the fluff as a stress relief? - ManifestRegret1yrCommented
I really enjoy your writing as it is. Doesn't mean you can't try things out because you have that level of quality if that makes sense.
- Any advise on improving my writing? - ManifestRegret1yrCommented
If you find it more convenient or want to expand the audience base go for it. Just keep us updated so we know and can follow.
- Should i relocate in another website like Fanfiction*dot* net? - ManifestRegret1yrReplied to ONEPUNCH
Even then the Netherlands with the highest average height is around 180cm for an adult
He was wearing a tang suit and had darkish-brown hair, that is paired with the same color as his eyes. She made a rough guess that he should be around his early teens. As for his height, he was about around 180cm, roughly matching the age she speculated. - ManifestRegret1yrCommented
From the perspective of an immortal there still should be a certain threshold to being called small resource point no? If it can't produce immortal materials they wouldn't even bother.
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How would she even know? She has been a disciple for like a week. Before that she was a commoner.
This was the first time she had heard of such a young Cardinal. This was too unbelievable. - ManifestRegret1yrCommented
Gulp should be gulf.
The strength behind its punch was enough to counter Hera's full-charged [Tackle] and still have the energy to spare. This was how different an Intermediate Stage pokemon was from a Beginner stage pokemon. It was a gulp that could not be easily crossed, a gulp of both levels and stage. - ManifestRegret2yrCommented
Really ...
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This paragraph has been deleted. - ManifestRegret2yrReplied to Skeithking
Brother don't leave me hanging like this. Kindly share the other two
However, knowing that Kong Dabao was beside him, Su Jingxing suppressed his excitement and did not spill the beans.