Bly999

I loved this story as with dumbledore you have to think his friend is the first dark lord and he brought the second in to it he just does not want to see a 3rd

dont care what enyone says he is broken

he seems to be translating as I have found it witch is the same called hogwarts passerby professor with 438 cp

auther translation no info and trying to get paid with patron author you should at least give its original name and original author not just take it translate and leave your patreon

I feel like I have read this from some where before

the other 1 is still good mate

tho not the original author very much want yo thank you for allowing me the opportunity to read thus as it was a blast to read and I very much enjoyed it and for thos people that are looking to see what we say stop reading and bloody read it then when finished thank me at the end I promise you will enjoy it

love it just wished the story never ended I picked it up as a short read and stayed to the end it is one of the most interesting reads that I have had the pleasure to read and 100% would requmend

lovly story original is 200 chapts of this review and is stolen original author published it under the title star wars adventure of bounty hunter with 200 chwpts not this 30 on here

the names aiden adventure with around 200 chapts