I know almost all of you are reading this story for fun but revealing himself/herself to a world that see cultivation for the first time is very foolish and naive thinking.

Chapters are short and the writing that has been chosen made it look more silly than anything else. :(

You know MyLittleBrother quite well :D

the update stats he was asking are the numbers ... Like a gaming status as we had in the past chapters.

It's a dream sadly :'(

So much caps in one chapter O_O. It was hurtful for my eyes, the chapter was nice overall. I like the start of the story. Especially the fact that the MC accept his nature as devil.

The writing quality is lower than what I can handle. The way the MC and other character speak is bland or void of emotion due to the writing. I dare not say the story is bad so I don't post a review but just type a comment here. Maybe your story will go up in the ranking in the future and I'll check it out again. Hope that you rewrite every chapters of course.

I will stop here, not enough chapter for now. Your story is fun to read, some things can be changed in your wording but overall it was a pleasure to read it until chapter 53. I'm saving your story until you reach a good number of chapter. Keep it up Sixth, you're doing good.

It's a healthy dao :D

" Killing humans was naturally evil " ...

I like the story but the grammar, conjugation, wording is messy. Not messy enough for me to drop this story but still ... Hope author will re-write the story at some point so that new reader can fully enjoy it.

Thanks for the answer, I'm not a native too but after more than 5 years of reading novels, I got better and better at reading english. I'll save your story for later. Maybe, one or two years later, you would rewrite the story after you feel good enough. Thanks for the answer.

It's not that easy to kill the one who raised you even though that person is an asshole.

writing quality : 3 star. The rest got 4 to 5 stars. I hope for a better writing quality. Good story, continue your good job author ![img=recommend]

"ruthless"/"evil"/"cold" tags but to me, the appropriate tag should have been "jungle's law" and "humanity true face" tag.

What's the problem about having fun ?

Being a minor doesn't mean you can't have sexual relations, there is an age limit for that. In france, it's 15 years and is tolerated as long as it's between minors. But Who care if a woman of 30 years old **** with a young boy of 16 years old ? As long as both want it.

The original MC was weak and dumb, this one is not any better ... I don't kny why I'm still reading.

I understand the way this story is going, I just wanted to remind newbies that Sub/Dom *** isn't like this. I dislike the story because of my liking, not because it is bad. Thanks for your honest answer without toxic and rage in it. I hope your story conquer people and good luck !

With the way she's acting, there's no bound or trust. Just pure dominance. What she want are slave and not submissive and obviously her slaves will have almost no background/history unlike a mistress who can be lovely but forceful at the same time. The brainwashing of Derek is a good example to prove my point. If there are people who are submissive here and want a mistress or master. Don't think this story show the right way.