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DeSu

DeSu

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An Aspiring Novel Writer.

2019-09-03 JoinedPhilippines
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2mth
    Posted

    The Author passed by again. Looking by and seeing no feedback in place. So the Author will motivate himself.

    Reincarnation: Weird Progenitor.
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2mth
    Posted

    The Author left this review to inspire himself. Hopefully, those passing readers will leave a positive criticism.

    Platinum Serpent
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  • DeSu
    DeSu3mth
    Commented

    Please comment on errors and suggestions. I will do my best to correct it. God bless.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2. Proper Slave
    Platinum Serpent
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  • DeSu
    DeSu3mth
    Commented

    As the author I feel weird reading my work. I can even see some errors which I will slowly work on correcting. so I thank those who will let me know anything to be corrected.

    Ch 1 01 Reincarnation
    Reincarnation: Weird Progenitor.
    Fantasy · DeSu
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    Just ask Death to command dead magic users in her domain to compile their knowledge. But I am unsure if there will be Asgardians since they have another supposed afterlife?

    "Well, it's not like I have to make this decision right now. Before leaving the planet to study from god-like aliens, I would have to finish my last year at Hogwarts first. Not to mention the other plans I have in motion, among other things. Until then, I'll just focus on my studies and try to find a way to knock out Hela." Tom says, placating the Ancient One's worries.
    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    True.

    Vinda smiled. "oh yes, but first wizards much change how they view magic as I did. and Humans must get over their inferiority complex and fear of difference. Your kind still murders over the color of skin and religion. Imagine if wizards revealed themselves again."
    Rise of the Hollow Family -HP Fanfic
    Book&Literature · Player_Tenason
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    This right here speaks of wisdom.

    "We go to the Hakopa Ancestral Home and you will claim everything that is rightfully yours. After that, you choose what you want to do with it. No such thing as too powerful, too educated, or too rich. Those are terms spoken by people who wish they had a fraction of what you have. Come now. We need to clean up."
    Rise of the Hollow Family -HP Fanfic
    Book&Literature · Player_Tenason
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    Why? Cartoon Physiology is OP and his own power, unlike the external armor.

    'alright! that's what I'm talking about! now I will be able to react perfectly no matter how fast I am moving! system swap cartoon physics out for temporal perception control then sell the left-over powers.'
    [DROPED]In Marvel With Random Power System
    Others · Shadow8ting
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    That is slow!?

    the scientists and I have been working on a way to make people immortal so that I won't have to lose my grandparents or my parents, also so that the ancient one won't have to deal with Dormammu anymore. research has been going slow but we think we should be able to finish it before next year.
    [DROPED]In Marvel With Random Power System
    Others · Shadow8ting
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    lol

    "Yep. And her name is Ring by the way. Really Intelligent Networking Gal."
    Roommates in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · NoobMastar69
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    Why didn't he do this to others? Like Magneto and sinister?

    "See it wouldn't have to be this way, however I simply can't put faith in you guys changing for the better. And being the benevolent person i am. I just have to help when i see someone in trouble." I smile at the other two while rewriting Blob down to the subconscious level and inserting the adamantium cage around his heart.
    What? I'm bored.
    Anime & Comics · Ryan_Colman
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Replied to AlphaZwei

    Makes sense.

    " Next match up. Gon vs cannon fodder number 1835267409. " Said the announcer.
    HxH: Infinity
    Anime & Comics · Asce
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    huh?

    " Yeah...Imma stay with my friends and new father. Please tell well sperm donor 1 and sperm donor 2 that I won't be coming home. Thanks. " Killua said.
    HxH: Infinity
    Anime & Comics · Asce
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    lol hahaha

    " Completely normal. " Illumi said.
    HxH: Infinity
    Anime & Comics · Asce
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Posted

    A great world construction and a great read. I like the way Harry was portrayed and the use of magic. Although there is not much action, this slice of life is good enough.

    Why not? HP/Twilight
    Book&Literature · burnable
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    I'm confused.

    This chapter has been deleted.
    Harry Potter : Lestrange
    Fantasy · Hitansh_Sonwane
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    lol

    <yes and no, the justice league was just a side project one of my avatars made in its boredom, but anyways child I owe you a apology you were not meant to die in that mugging> The One Above All replies
    Cultivator in the MCU
    Action · Phoenixrd
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    Nice.!

    Elijah: Sleep.
    Chilling in marvel
    Fantasy · ClingyDemon
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Posted

    Nice work. Great world building. Although at some point I would've use the power differently. Regardless, a great job and a good read,, I say. Keep up the good work and I hope for more inspiration for the author.

    Reality Warping in Marvel (A Crooked Man)
    Fantasy · Bagoury
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  • DeSu
    DeSu2yr
    Commented

    lol

    Dammit, I wish I was shot more, Me and my bad luck.
    I'm In Game Of Thrones
    TV · Makh
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