each chapter seems too long, perhaps the author should make it shorter and also 1-2 tokens per chapter seems too little considering the "length", maybe they should charge 3-4 tokens per chapter 😑😑😑😑😑

*spoiler* I've finished reading the story. The story starts off pretty nice, the story line is very similar to coiling dragon. the novel ends abruptly there's absolutely no explanations for a lot of things. where did the system come from, what is the system, what happened to earth and his family, what happend to his room mate etc etc. it's like the author was writing the novel then thought "can't be bothered to continue, let's just make him the universe creator" then bam its done.

is there no mtl of this novel

I know the author is writing what he likes (and it's really good, I really enjoy this novel) but I don't think people like Shen xi would need to be worried about needing to fight slave traders from one piece world. She (and literally everyone in mesa's team at this point has minimum true God love power from atg world.) They could annihilate the one piece world million times over in a blink. instead what I suggest is that they seal most of their own powers for fun when they enter the one piece world (to the point they're still the strongest in the world but not too op) it could make these fight scenes interesting