SleepyGuy12

Nothing against the translator but the original author can't stay consistent with his own writing. In the very first chapter he introduced his character as from Ionia. The very next chapter while describing himself through Caitlyn's pov he describes himself as "should to be from the east". Cant even stop writing the word "east" for even a single chapter.

Is this The translation of fairy tail painting magic chinese fanfic? If it is only taking inspiration from it similar to a fanfic of a fanfic, no problem. If not, don't try to pass of someone else's hard work as your own.

The lizard thing isn't going to go the way of the first timeline Roxy who got sick due to the magic virus rat that hitogami brought to their house right?

I think the chinese author of this fanfic has died? There was a mention of him around qidian's reader forums but I can't be sure if they were talking about this author or not.

He is still thinking like a muggle. He just buried their limbs instead of giving them some sort of drug/poison that would keep them unconscious. even without their limbs they still have access to their supernatural energy/magic.

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tanned and smooth as a newborn? What kind of baby did you see that has tanned skin?

Why is everybody and their mother is trying to create human body enhancer? Yes, I get that it is a very popular subject in Marvel but don't they have any other projects to work on?

It should be chugging the beer. Not bear. I don't think Alzack has the arm strength to chug a bear.

Just finished the 11. chapter. Currently I have only 2 problems. The first is of course, the grammar and some wrong words here and there. The second is how obsessed he sounds with his past life bodybuilding activity. I mean, it looks like the author is trying too hard to make his past life relevant but its not working. Even as a kid, Luffy's just normal-not-trained-at-all physique would be superior to peak human of our real world. I guess it sounds like trying to use past life knowledge to gain some kind of advantage but it just sounds like author is trying too hard at this point.