SleepyGuy12

The way he reincarnates really doesn't matter. You could have just glossed over the whole meeting with the goddess part and started from when he wakes up in another world. The gatcha, meeting with the goddess of creation, his sacrifice, etc. kinda feels like overdone and cheap.

I really liked the story but I don't like the premise that Penny is slowly starting to have feelings towards Sheldon. At the point of personal character maturity of current Penny, this Sheldon would start to eclipse her in around few weeks of dating each other. I would really suggest author to rewatch the early episodes Penny and compare her to later seasons version of herself. There are some serious character development going on with Penny.

Nothing against the translator but the original author can't stay consistent with his own writing. In the very first chapter he introduced his character as from Ionia. The very next chapter while describing himself through Caitlyn's pov he describes himself as "should to be from the east". Cant even stop writing the word "east" for even a single chapter.

Is this The translation of fairy tail painting magic chinese fanfic? If it is only taking inspiration from it similar to a fanfic of a fanfic, no problem. If not, don't try to pass of someone else's hard work as your own.

The lizard thing isn't going to go the way of the first timeline Roxy who got sick due to the magic virus rat that hitogami brought to their house right?

I think the chinese author of this fanfic has died? There was a mention of him around qidian's reader forums but I can't be sure if they were talking about this author or not.

He is still thinking like a muggle. He just buried their limbs instead of giving them some sort of drug/poison that would keep them unconscious. even without their limbs they still have access to their supernatural energy/magic.

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tanned and smooth as a newborn? What kind of baby did you see that has tanned skin?

Why is everybody and their mother is trying to create human body enhancer? Yes, I get that it is a very popular subject in Marvel but don't they have any other projects to work on?