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I usually don't like to read fanfics as the plot but this one got me hooked and I couldn't stop till I reached the end. Also just because a person is from earth and heard about harry potter don't mean they know everything of the plot.
It's more like I felt the story divert a lot from the original story I was inspired from after the beginning few chapters that's why I reduced the number of chapters I posted daily as I am working on re-vamping it. But before that, I decided to try put in other parts to try out so that I could understand how the readers are taking it Thanks for your input
He simulated twice at once because he barely made any progress with the first simulation. Since he was destined to die the next day he used up all points in an effort to strengthen himself.
I like that he has started to question returning into the collective more and more. I wonder if he would consider making his own version of the collective.
But the lord himself doesnt seem to be a grand character, if something he is like a spoiled brat who wants to have a kingdom back so he just mess around. i mean he wants to invade before he even settled the issues inside his own race, even when he suffered grievous losses he doesnt change the plan but stubbornly insist on his ways.
well actually its opposite. collective hive mind is usually cowardly while spamming bots to protect itself, while most of emerging civilization leaders are battle worn warriors in the past. But then again as a brainwashed bot collector does not see it that way.