Hey! Wasn't his spirit sense up to 10 meters? Please be consistent with your details please.

I felt a tinge of pity but it was made so that she could pay for the atrocities she had done, regardless of it being unintentional. Good job for conveying emotions to the reader though. Kudos!!!

The music goddess and god ship will not be shaken!!!!

Finally!!! You're back!

Could you please tone down the harem for a bit and maybe let the characters develop more out of the concept of harem? And also a bit of gender diversity would be cool too. It's just really the harem part kinda ruin the book in a way. A little harem won't hurt but making the story revolve around harem kinda sucks too. Other than that the other aspects of the book looks promising.

Omg. He totally forgot about a certain someone who is in a certain scroll. LOL