wolfeng

This is probably the fastest revenge story I've ever read. 10/10

The synopsis was interesting so I'm willing to endure the atrocious formatting but what the heck is the point of having the child giving all that info dump? You might as well release the memories of the original in chunks instead. It would've been more reliable than a child providing such accurate intel.

Villainous systems are nothing new, but packaging it as a remnant soul trying to revive itself was brilliant. I love this take on the setting.

system usurper? Now that's a fun setting for a future novel.

If Leng'an did not record this show I'll be disappointed

This was a really brilliant way to push the story for the harem route. I'm looking forward to how the story progress, but so far it's been a blast

You gave Tilli a magic ring for disguise... And what kind of beast kin would not be able to smell the blood of dead body parts? C'mon!

Kana and Ceilie background and the reasons they hate humans was pretty good and it made sense why they bonded so quickly, but I can't say the same for this princess. I'm assuming the princess is a child, provably barely 13 since you failed to give her an age. But even if I consider her a small and naive child, the plot is too forced. If her maid was already brought by one of her siblings then she wouldn't allow the kid to run away, you already painted her as naive so she would be easily coaxed to give up these plans, even talking to one of the siblings or father. And they wouldn't allow her to escape and get so close to the border. It would've been better if you made the princess smart, cunning, hateful of royalty and humans after seeing her mother murdered and the indifference of a king, after seeing how greed and uncaring the servants are, after suffering abuse and humiliation once her mother was gone, but not this naive child who can be easily manipulated and has no sense of danger sleeping through the entire night attack and explosion. There's no reason to root for her or hope she becomes non-human, no reason to want her in the party.

where's the gif from?

Please give Ceilie a non-human evolution, I'm in love with these two girls and their hate for mankind.