I womder what’ll happen if holy water was integrated into the forbidden forest? Like dryads and unicorns bathing or drinking it. Idk just some thoughts for now

When will Dora get her moment to shine?🥺

Im surprised that i didnt see this coming, the forshadowing was there but like i did think his uncle’s financial problem was going to come up. I just thought it was going to be something stupid about some weird investment or he bought a yacht or something. im pleasantly surprised and now very interested since Jake’s backstory definitely had some holes in it. Idk what specifically but it just smelled fishy. keep up the good work!!!

Honestly really good descriptions for the intro of these characters. i can really picture them in my head[img=recommend]

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Although I’m sad since I don’t get to see the farming arch and other stuff, I still really enjoyed it since it was so well written that I didn’t notice the parts of the novel that you didn’t like. The consistent pacing, likeable characters that make you want to root for them, and amazing detail and love towards everything about the novel really helped and overshadowed the direction the story was going to take but didn’t like. Since you mentioned you weren’t happy with it, I was really happy you still love this novel and was willing to rewrite it cuz you weren’t satisfied. I think other ppl would give up and power through so I guess your broken computer was a blessing in disguise. Until you mentioned the things you weren’t satisfied with, it started to make sense why I felt melting snow and wandering sound’s (i think?) relationship felt off and the other foreshadowing that was there but never really happened. I just thought it would happen after they met up again. I still hope you keep the same personality of the protagonist cuz his backstory and calm demeneor really made this story shine, in my opinion. I guess I just have a soft spot for ppl w/ disabilities being able to do things they never could in vr (or something like that idk the difference woth mmo either lol) and being able to overcome their traumas and such in stories is always satisfying (?) with the heartwarming lesson that everyone could use and remember. tbh after I binged this novel, i tried to find other novels with kind of the same male protag and backstory but no luck or wasn’t as interesting as this. I was excited and loved all the foreshadowing because even though I could sense where the story was going, I was looking forward to how you were going to write it since I can always expect you to pleasantly surprise me with an abundance of details and events that are really dynamic that make you want to be part of the game too. but not really since its expensive. Anyways this is just a long winded way of saying thank you for not giving up on this novel and I look forward to reading the new version!✨ ps hoping you could keep it shounen ai at least since I like the way those are written compared to normal straight romances that are harem or happen way too fast and have no chemistry❤️

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I highly like slice of life stories since its interesting to me and the pace helps me relax at the end of a busy day. I also dont write reviews often, but this book has everything I’m looking for and i can’t wait for more updates. Its an added bonus that its bl, too. I wonder how long this book will go, honestly it wouldn’t surprise me if it reached 1000 chapters. There’s enough world material and hints of conflicts coming up later that i’m excited for, especially the face slapping for the women that keeps following them. I also have a feeling that everyone is able to meet in the real world eventually and takes revenge on the mc’s stepmother for him or at least i hope it happens. i like it when they’re angry for him because they somehow always say what i want to say to tell other people off. The part i’m most excited for is the slow building of the farm and added adventures that follow, which is where we’re at right now. I wish i was able to binge read it because i love that arc the most in other slice of life books, too. Highly reccommend if you like this sort of stuff. i’m also blown away that it’s an original because it has the feel of other good translated slice of life novels. If theres one thing i could critque, when mc can’t remember hints or details of the game he previous played or hints being overlooked, i think is a little overplayed with the way it’s written at this point of the story. But, i’m sure when the game deviates from what he remembers it’ll go away. I know its normal to overlook and forget stuff, but i’m not saying to change the mc so he can remember everything. i just mean be a little more creative, don’t change the wind of luck though. i like that its a reliable constant in the game. sorry for rambling and thank you to the author who’s working so hard to build this story more. im looking forward to reading more! Fighting :)

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Looks like we’re together on this messed up sleep schedule thing lol

Excited for the next chapter always looking for an update everyday lol🥰

I can’t wait till the next chapter! I’m excited to see jake do more but i have a feeling a steel bat is going to make an appearance.