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Yeah, it's a very specific reaction. For example when someone places something really disgusting infront of you and you lean back in your chair and pull a face. It's difficult to explain... Or when someone sets an impossible task for you and you just pale. It has many different meanings.
I imagined it looks something like this.
Trite means boring, normal, ordinary.
pizzaz, if that is what you are referring to, is also used correctly. It means something like atmosphere, ambience, etc.
??? Balked is right if you mean that word.
The writing quality does not disappoint, as the title says. Unlike most other novels on this site you can actually read this story, without instinctively reaching for the closest bottle of bleach to rub into your eyes. Update rate is stable and has been on a daily frequency for the last week, don't know if it will remain that way. Story developement is too slow for my tastes. After 10 chapters Cole got a few abilities and brainstormed uses for them, but that's it. If it goes on like this we'll be at chapter 100 when the chunin exams start. Character Design is just wow. Cole doesn't say the right thing all the time, conversations don't always go his way, but he shows emotional depth and understands his mistakes. He's a normal human so to speak. On World Background, come on, it's Naruto. Really great overall.
Gotta love Anthony man.
Apart from writing quality, which has a one or two mistakes every chapter - small spelling errors mostly -, everything else is great. Good update rate. Nice story that takes you along a dungeon-esque adventure, but as an ant. Cool characters that remain in their pre-conceived limits. Ant zealots stay ant zealots and don't just change and become *shudders* centipede zealots. World Background is ever expanding. We have only seen 3 levels and had 5 levels mentioned of a truly massive underground eco-system. Very good story, highly recommend it.
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