KingEngineer

Harem?

Is it harem?

Loved everything about the story but sometimes after he visits the x men house with Jean it started going downhill after it way to many chapter to lift up 10 rocks. After that everything just went slow. But this is where I draw the line. He killed three gang members so they won’t learn his identity. He told his father and he said as long as you don’t become a monster. But then he lets kid father killer go. He didn’t just killed his father but tortured him. Then he let him go with a warning after letting a known manipulative person like Emma frost into his mind. I can forgive the Emma frost thing because he needed to know if this was really the guy. But letting your fathers killer go with absolutely no punishment is fucking crazy. Epically after showing him your face. Stupidest decision I have ever seen and seems like a complete break in character to make him “justice” oriented.

This isn’t that cat woman though. This is cat woman that is loyal to him above all else.

Thank god lol. Would have cried if it was a character that would have outshined and/or manipulated them with the system. The system telling her that she can gain all of the mc attributed, even the unique one, is as a big red flag. Thought that bullshit was gonna happen.

I love your novel so far, but the system characters are turning me away. I wa just introduced to Sarah and it seems like she has limited influence on the people with her harem system (including the mc and her harem). Are system users now just characters that are op and can influence the mc group or will they eventually be able to stop them from influencing. I really want to continue but would rather drop it now if that’s the case.

I think he dropped this. He updating his other five and started a new fic. Either that or he losing motivation for this and about to drop it. Unfortunate. Loved this😢

I’m on chapter 337. I love this story but it definitely has its annoying points that’s becoming more and more intolerable as I read. Her inability to do critical thinking, no sense of danger, both of these it seems she sometimes lacks just to for plot. Her obliviousness that seems on the level of a harem protagonist but not just about the women in her life but about everything. The reason I wrote this review is because on chapter 336, someone was obviously calling her beautiful, but she seems oblivious till the end where even a toddler would realize there talking about her. Another time is at her birthday, people was staring at her because of her beauty, but she wrote it off as some stupid reason I forgot. I love this story but these small things that keep showing up ruin the experience. She needs a character arc quick where she grows up and starts to realize that you can have fun in life without thinking that she is immortal and can’t die. She needs to experience helplessness and a reality check.

I was loving the story but the focus on some wives being above others is annoying. Violet being empress and having control of the other wives is grating to me for some reason lol. Loving and valuing someone doesn’t mean they should hold more power in the family. Epically during leasure times.

Love the first story and a Angel OC in mha sounds interesting.