yuukihime

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yuukihime3 years ago
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I like the idea of your story and would offer my help as an editor so that the grammer won t be a problem anymore.
Ch 4 4 energy gathering
Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
Fantasy · patrick_john_yu
yuukihime3 years ago
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+1 but i want gender bender
-Reborn in Marvel as Asgardian Royalty
Reborn As Sakura's Little Sister
Anime & Comics · ChocoMintIce
yuukihime3 years ago
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+1
Oh yeah, do you want this to be a genderbender? (Where a male becomes female or do you want a full female protagenist?)
Reborn As Sakura's Little Sister
Anime & Comics · ChocoMintIce
yuukihime4 years ago
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I'm sorry I overlooked the almost part.
"Correct like always, Sakura," Iruka said, Sakura blushed a little at this praise, "but you forgot a couple of things." Everyone groaned, this statement always means Iruka was going into monologue mode. "As Sakura said, chakra is the molded form of our physical and spiritual energies, produced by our bodies and minds. Hence, to get more chakra you can increase mental capacities, or work out. But they need to be done in tandem to steadily increase chakra reserves. A ninja must use almost all of their maximum storage, before letting it restore. Slowly stretching out the container limit they have on their chakra. Chakra is also spread through genetics, as such a Nara will have lower reserves compared to an Akimichi. While a male will also have more chakra than a female, but this is not always the case. But with more chakra comes the problem of controlling it. A ninja that has as much chakra as a Hokage, yet zero control, will lose to a ninja with as much chakra as a civilian, with perfect control. If they had the same body strength and combat knowledge. Now, a civilian will usually have a chakra source comparable to a puddle of chakra, an academy bathtub of chakra, a Genin will have a small pond of chakra, a Chunin will have a large pond of chakra, a Jonin will have a lake of chakra, and a Kage will have a sea of chakra. The large difference in chakra between Jonin and Chunin is also another reason why most ninja stop at the Chunin rank. Chakra control is increased through basic exercises, such as the leaf sticking exercise. Now, there is much more to learn about chakra, as shown by the years of research. But these are the basic of the basics, and all we will need for now. Who's ready to take their first step into the ninja life?" There were cheers around the room.
Being A Ninja Isn't So Hard If I Can Cultivate
Anime & Comics · GreenDragon1222
yuukihime4 years ago
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There is a problem in your logic of "USE ALL CHAKRA TO INCREASE IT" because of the reason that one dies , if you do that.
"Correct like always, Sakura," Iruka said, Sakura blushed a little at this praise, "but you forgot a couple of things." Everyone groaned, this statement always means Iruka was going into monologue mode. "As Sakura said, chakra is the molded form of our physical and spiritual energies, produced by our bodies and minds. Hence, to get more chakra you can increase mental capacities, or work out. But they need to be done in tandem to steadily increase chakra reserves. A ninja must use almost all of their maximum storage, before letting it restore. Slowly stretching out the container limit they have on their chakra. Chakra is also spread through genetics, as such a Nara will have lower reserves compared to an Akimichi. While a male will also have more chakra than a female, but this is not always the case. But with more chakra comes the problem of controlling it. A ninja that has as much chakra as a Hokage, yet zero control, will lose to a ninja with as much chakra as a civilian, with perfect control. If they had the same body strength and combat knowledge. Now, a civilian will usually have a chakra source comparable to a puddle of chakra, an academy bathtub of chakra, a Genin will have a small pond of chakra, a Chunin will have a large pond of chakra, a Jonin will have a lake of chakra, and a Kage will have a sea of chakra. The large difference in chakra between Jonin and Chunin is also another reason why most ninja stop at the Chunin rank. Chakra control is increased through basic exercises, such as the leaf sticking exercise. Now, there is much more to learn about chakra, as shown by the years of research. But these are the basic of the basics, and all we will need for now. Who's ready to take their first step into the ninja life?" There were cheers around the room.
Being A Ninja Isn't So Hard If I Can Cultivate
Anime & Comics · GreenDragon1222
yuukihime4 years ago
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What kind of feeling ? Shouldn't he study and improve his math skills ? Esper abilities are dependent on your calculation skills and not some kind of feeling.
Shirai Kuroko and her teleportation ability. I can no longer teleport myself right now. I can still teleport things I touch the same distance as before. Luckily I was her for a long time and used her power a lot so I just need to remember the felling of teleporting myself to get that back. I will need to work on the speed as well. I can't teleport things as fast as I could before.
Random Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Sandman78
yuukihime4 years ago
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vary good ;)
It was noon break right now. I was happy that the food is vary good here and cheap too.
Random Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Sandman78

SCP in DxD

Who would have thought that reincarnation is a thing ? Well I didn't until I was chosen by a by a system that fuels my inner megalomaniac. The world should be prepared as an abnormality will shake things up. Cover Image not mine. If the owner doesn't want to allow the use, I will take it down.

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