Gala3

Inconsistent world building, illogical character choices, convenient meetings with antagonists just to brew conflict. Poorly written, terribly executed, will make you mad. Examples in the first few chapters: MC is in a zone that makes him lose life over time and when he’s searching for coins to get out chooses to sit down rather than continuing to search. MC gets an entry that allows him to get a free ticket to leave the instance but tries to rob a bank to get more coins (which are now useless to him since he needed them to get a ticket) and ends up losing/wasting more of his lifespan. Why? MC happens to run into a mob that’s chasing another guy who has a ticket to leave the instance via train but they somehow are at the pier where the MC is trying to leave via boat. Shouldn’t they have been at the other side of the town? Why are they meeting there right as MC is about to escape? MC is apparently one of the fastest people in the instance and has been running away a significant distance from the mob but they manage to catch up to him. How? Overall, story concept has potential but execution is terrible. Do not recommend reading.

Crit rate doesn’t make sense and character strength development is too slow given how his system is supposed to speed him up.

Inconsistent growth for how OP he is supposed to be. Poor overall world design. Copy-Paste of other vrmmorpg novel progression with no new twists.

He’s creating more problems for himself by panicking and moving recklessly. Obvious plot device is dumb.