so bad that it'll hurt your brain. if anyone does something a lil good then any peanut gallery will sing a song of praise. but if the mc does something great then any peanut gallery will badmouthing and condescending his effort. theres so many oportunity that he got and then he forgot all about it in the next couple chapter. the author create so many opportunity that he forgot all of em and go to another thing that will make you so infuriated with this story. for example what happened to his promise with the dragon and his reward for completing dragon quest? what happened to his broken steel armor? why didnt you try and create em for f sake? if you like to die out of anger, this trash is the right way for u to reach hell. thats it.

than not then

u use strange choise of continuous word. u use the word 'however' if you say in the first part of line about how opposite or have something to consider about the word mean against second part of line mean. example 'eventhough he can sweep the floor however now he can't sweep the floor because his hand hurt'. like that.

what a weird writing.. it talked in third point of view and instantly changed into first person of view. so unstable and strange. for me it makes me uncomfortable.