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jaclea

jaclea

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'merica, weeb, bookworm. gimmie my exp!

2018-04-25 JoinedUnited States
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  • jaclea
    jaclea1yr
    Commented

    Yeah good luck with that bud

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    My Online Girlfriend Is The Nine Heaven Divine Phoenix
    Eastern · My Daughter Is Too Cute
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  • jaclea
    jaclea1yr
    Replied to SpringInHell

    I think he means the prev tournamen he didn’t participa in. Meaning the trainers in this year are stronger than in previous years.

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    Pokemon: Master of tactics
    Anime & Comics · alex02373
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  • jaclea
    jaclea2yr
    Commented

    I realize I am late to the party, but wouldn't she already know how to fight from her first life? It sounded like she had killed for the insecure prince and even if she can't do it right now due to being physically weak she should still know how to fight and just needs to get stronger to do it.

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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Commented

    Trainer alex used taunt, it was super effective!

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    Pokemon: Master of tactics
    Anime & Comics · alex02373
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to DaoistPancake

    nah man target should be a rattata with endeavor and quick attack

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    Pokemon: Master of tactics
    Anime & Comics · alex02373
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to Hekat0nchei

    as someone who has read the hundred years blood war arc (and half remembers it) no. The head captain could potentially win the war on his own, but everyone else would die in the process. He only fails because everyone prepares for him beforehand.

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    The Arrancar
    Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to DukeNeaffy

    The fact that you had a typo with the word typo is incredibly amusing for some reason.

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    The Arrancar
    Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to Alvinbrrrrrr

    What is gay really tho?

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    The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
    Anime & Comics · Zakirael
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to LogMetro

    Now how will they each react upon meeting the other.

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    Grandson of the Holy Emperor is a Necromancer
    Urban · Shadow-kun
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Commented

    Do you mean Layla?

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    The Arrancar
    Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Posted

    Short Version: I like where the story is, but I wish more time was put into the background. Backstory is basically just Bleach with nothing else really changed besides immediate area of MC. Long Version: I think more time should have been spent on MC journey to becoming strong as it feels like she was doing pushups and went from basic hollow to Aranncar in no time (even though around 100 years passed). It can still technically be retconned with flashbacks if author feels like it, but not necessary obviously. Suggestions: If i were to suggest one it might be a connection with Rukia as she likes rabbits and MC is Rabbit Hollow. Perhaps she wants to explore the world a bit and happens across Rukia's abandonment and wanting to know how things go from there she waits only for no one to show up as Rukia gets weaker and so eventually she steps in and takes care of Rukia for a bit. Then plot happens and Rukia leaves not really knowing about MC, but there is still a connection that Rukia can feel when she comes across MC again. As for MC motives it can be as simple as she wants plot to remain consistent so she knows what is going on. Conclusion: Good story, wish there was more background development. I look forward to seeing where you go from here. I haven't written anything so take my suggestions with a bunch of salt.

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    The Arrancar
    Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Commented

    make that 3 trillion and you got it

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    An ton's Journey ( StarCraft + other worlds)
    Video Games · Muravey
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Commented

    Don't worry my bullets will heal you for negative damage!

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    Grandson of the Holy Emperor is a Necromancer
    Urban · Shadow-kun
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Commented

    So will zerg heroes be brought over or will new heroes be created i.e. a new overmind not related to the previous one.

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    An ton's Journey ( StarCraft + other worlds)
    Video Games · Muravey
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to jaclea

    Borg would also fit as a four letter name that assimilates races technologically.

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    An ton's Journey ( StarCraft + other worlds)
    Video Games · Muravey
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Commented

    Amon?

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    An ton's Journey ( StarCraft + other worlds)
    Video Games · Muravey
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to The_Merchant

    That is why you read it thou

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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Commented

    I feel that you haven't finished reading the zed comic and you may want to do that : )

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    Reincarnation in Runeterra
    Video Games · Ice_Wielding_Ronin
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to ThyUnknownSaint

    Politics

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    Grandson of the Holy Emperor is a Necromancer
    Urban · Shadow-kun
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  • jaclea
    jaclea3yr
    Replied to Zevren

    I mean Darth jar jar is just outside

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    Star Wars: Wrath of The Force
    Video Games · Zevren
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