Just Google search "game of thrones fanfiction the mountains range" It's the same copied over

Nice chapter Can't believe I'm rooting for a lannister but I hope the "kidnapping" was him finally get together with his lioness

good chapter

Amazing chapter Looking forward to the next one

Nice chapter, good to see him slowly developing his technique

Nah man, follow your blueprint. If they want a get strong quick cardboard then there's plenty of other stories like that. I for one find it interesting to follow character development so good luck

I'd say to go at the pace you initially planned. It's clear that you have a path of development for the character that you want to follow both personality and power wise. The story uptil now had been at a good enough pace since you clearly said that this was gonna be a slow read. It's also always better to show your character do the important stuff (very first mission is likely going to be important) rather than to just dictate it like a diary. After the mission of you still feel like your story is too slow pace then a small time skip wouldn't be amiss but don't forget that the event with gojo and the star vessel happens in this year so you don't wanna just skip past that.

"swords are for barbarians" "magic is superior" Sword Saint William waiting to get revenge soon

man's just suffering from PTSD

Absolute Chad

Webnovel messes up the format. |||Water -> Ice (H), Plant (E)||| Earth -> Gravity(H&D), Metal (D)||| ->Magma [Earth + Fire] (D)||| Fire -> Lightning (H)||| Wind -> Sound (H&E)

Same for me, its supposed to be kinda like this Water -> Ice (H), Plant (E) Earth -> Gravity(H&D), Metal (D) ->Magma [Earth + Fire] (D) Fire -> Lightning (H) Wind -> Sound (H&E)

I just hope its something like him giving in before he removes necklace and nips this threat in the bud kinda like what the did with cersei. Atleast the impression i've gaining from his character is that he's not the type to sabotage himself like that

So the vibe I'm getting is that he plans to disrupt the orientation ceremony but if he does that and the teachers there figure out that they can't kill him, won't they just lock him up somewhere? Tho that would lock him at the antagonist role unless he can somehow fake his death and run away in the confusion. I like his ruthlessness towards himself, hope that extends towards others when it needs to as well. Thanks for the chapter

If you ask my advice, he could have awoken in a lone grave in the wilderness somewhere which would not only give him enough privacy to test out whatever he wants but it would be possible to investigate which path the story is taking later on. Plus he can get killed all he wants by the monsters out there but hey it's your fic and your idea so have fun writing

Interesting concept but how tf is he getting around Cube that easily, I would suppose that a military academy has its share of cameras and security guards etc

could be that he wasn't that familiar with how exactly his ability and just thought it was permanently sending away the damage but was actually just delaying it. I don't remember if mangekyou users get the full explanation of their ability when they awaken or they have to figure it out on their own experimentation and its possible seeing as he hasn't had it for too long. Going back to his GF dying maybe his wish at the moment was the delay her injuries so he could get back and get her healed. or i'm just looking too deeply into it

I don't think that would be a problem since it was stated in the previous chapter that she felt her connection with the dragon vein being severed. Tho it could still be possible for Orochimaru to make that connection cause he knows what kuroto is after and where he was a while ago and he knows enough of the MC's capability to believe that he can disappear quickly and come back without much people noticing. And this is Orochimaru we're talking about, the dude is smart enough to make these connections with ease and even if he isn't 100% sure, he still will be 99% suspicious. Tho he has already shown his disregard for tail beasts so I don't think it's gonna be a major problem for the MC

Same man, feels bad. Just gotta run some games and spend the time

same, i just started looking up how many seconds there are in a year. it's 31,536,000 if you're curious