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ty aurthor for a good quick story.
this dropped?
this is my opinion so meh. another chiness story that is unreadable after a few chaps. i get the authors try but chiness phrases/slang does not translate verywell. it makes the story unreadable and the fustrating. just a thought but perhaps when translating try and convert the phrases/slang to the western equivlent. these kind of stories always start out great but about chap 3-5 they start showing too manny gramer errors and refrences to things not related to the story setting.
Who and the what now????
i am gonna get hate for this but meh. good story but to manny r18 chapters where nuttin happens for story progress. i like reading ff to see the au elements in the storys once they start doing r18 chaps back to back the ff turns into a hentai at that point might as well fire up the old phub. so far outside the r18 chaps the story is desent.
please dont give voldi some stupid powerup and have him comeback. i want to see a hp ff without the noselessone
you have me curious. let see how this plays out. just please dont make it a harem. getting kind tired of them.
really looking forward to what this MC has i n store for us. no often you see a MC trained by the secret service let alone MI6.