Chev

I can say you don't have a lot of editing to do within this story. Reading this so far has drawn me and wanting more. Only wish you can do a little bit more detail within your story and it would be even more amazing. Keep up the good work ^-^

Interesting O.O wonder how the character going to use it.

All you need is a great editor and this story would be amazing. Hope to read more .So please update 😁 Also hope everyone keeps supporting this novel 🙂 worth the read.

Hey everyone Author here. Dark Passion is my First every book I have written and hope you will fall in love with it. As much I love writing this story. Thank you for supporting my novel - Chev

Hey Panda, great novel see alot of potential. hope you continue writing and see where this novel take the reader. believe you need to get a little bit of feedback or second opinion. to help improve your novel.

great story. worth the read. keep up the good work see alot more good story in your future. with a few things you need to work on, but other that it really amazing story.

I believe your a great writer. with a great start for a story. added your story to my collection of books. hope to see more of your stories. :)