aarana22
of reading
255
Read books
I came back when I saw five chapters saved up hoping it wasn't going be more filler but now I'm starting to wonder if you decided to switch to slice of life. With Meliodas living in another world exactly as he would in his original world as if nothing was strange except even when his BELOVED ELIZABETH the love of his life who he spent 3000 years of pain and sorrow hoping to break the curse of reincarnation but he hasn't worried about her since he arrived infact he's only mentioned home not her once. jellal was a wizard saint since you said he's gotten stronger I assume hes at the level of the 4 emperor's of ishgar meaning there's still the 12 sprigans who could wife him out after all 1 sprigan wipred out all 4 emperor's at once and I don't know if you only read fairytale but it has a sequel called 100 years quest and it turns out there's 5 other dragons as strong as acnologia in fact they even say the dragon god selene is even stronger. so you having him play bar keep while he doesn't even try to improve literally at all he hasn't developed in 150 chapters forget about him developing and growing as a character your still trying to make him reach his most natural and basic state that he already reached in his old world he's not even building a team to help him beat chaos at home which was the original plot point of this story. can you see why I'm saying all you've written since tenrou island is filler and just slice of life because it is the same as making a chapter of him going on a walk to the supermarket runs into burglars foils the robbery next chapter you add action but it's inconsequential to the actual story!!!!!!
hey author you said the you wouldn't get to the end of the time skip till August or something right is it mid or late, because I'm not really a fan of slice of life genre so I'd rather just come back once your done with this filler stuff and the real story starts.
again nothing to complain about by how fast you want to grow his strength obviously the title of the story ends with him as the strongest I'm just talking about having a village full of weakling or those talented who's talents were wasted and knowing a godlike alien RACE not one or two but all of the offspring with insane Bodies and power
hey author I'ma be honest this fan fiction compared to other one's is alot better and I can see you have some type of plan. but again just being honest this story with the trajectory it's going even if one day you get him to kaguya level my friend that was only considered strong in Naruto, in Boruto there have been more than 3 characters who were stated to be beyond her and there's even several people who are super kage lvl so what I'm saying is. does his story knowledge only end at Naruto because he is not trying to raise talents even though a race of celestial alien gods are going to invade. each and every one of which is kage lvl at minimum with the innate ability to eat chakra and kimimaro possible one of the best anti otsosuki characters based purely on potential decided hey let him follow the plot till he gets sick and dies. also fine with the fact that only he and possibly Naruto and Sasuke who both lost in a 2v1 fight can challenge them. already animated BTW check it out.
a Naruto you trained personally since he was for year old even solving the issues with the fox without his knowledge isn't he just weak because you made him weak you could have told him his shadow clones can train independently like the time he mastered rasen shuriken but no he weak as Sasuke who was trained by an unimpressed Father cool
it was used while in purgatory after ban left purgatory for the real world Netflix's new season of the seven sins covers all the way to Meliodas being possessed by the demon king in Japan they already animated the seven sins vs zeldris demon king boss fight it was so good!!!!!!
thanks for the chapter just asking one more time did chaos mess up his memories along with his power and for some reason only the memory of his strongest offensive technique trillion dark I mean he learned the ability after king condensed a single drop of water from the moisture in a stick and it was so strong it made Meliodas bleed and forced him to dodge nonstop it's a move for the weak to hurt the strong by condensing his darkness into a dense and heavy sphere it tore holes through his Dad's true body like nothing even if he can make millions of them like he did against his dad for whatever reason he could have at least made ten or IDK maybe even just one, you had forshadowed Agnologias wound first chapter basically I just assumed that you had set it up for something awesome or maybe to show that even at his weakest Meliodas though he couldn't beat the legendary dragon he could still make it bleed thanks to the knowledge and experience of his life with the 7 sins plus a little luck that it was already scarred but I didn't think that it was the same exact result as the original story even though Meliodas now exist and the fact the dragon was injured prior to the main plot nothing changed in the slightest as if Meliodas actions affected nothing in this world since he arrived except his name is equal to all of fairytale alone now which is cool on it's own it's easy to be the best when gildarts is locked away and you prevened lightning fire dragon mode now it'll give Meliodas more time to shine!!!
I agree with you In the power scaling, it sounds the most reasonable and again I know you had to make Meliodas loose in an overwhelming manner and fashion purely for plot reasons did chaos seal away some memories along with his power because he didn't use (trillion dark) the skill where he condensed his darkness into an extremely dense and heavy sphere that tore through the demon kings main body in purgatory like paper even the demon king was baffled by that technique and that was purely Meliodas as an emotional spirit even stating to ban he was much weaker in purgatory because he was just a spirit body so did he forget this ultimate offensive technique that tore up his father due to chaos or???
he's 15 right so does the system affect his body because your saying he reached a bottleneck even though he will literally grow and mature for another five years or does the system make it so growing up will only make him taller without changing his original weight and mass AKA power that's a bad trade off to me now he can only grow based of the system even regular humans gets stronger with time until full maturity in their mid twenties