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aarana22

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  • aarana222 years ago
    Replied to scoots

    Special ED right???

  • aarana223 years ago
    Commented

    lol dolls that have no ego and can be breated by one family he wastes money on them coulda built 10,000 for cheap materials.

  • aarana224 years ago
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    I came back when I saw five chapters saved up hoping it wasn't going be more filler but now I'm starting to wonder if you decided to switch to slice of life. With Meliodas living in another world exactly as he would in his original world as if nothing was strange except even when his BELOVED ELIZABETH the love of his life who he spent 3000 years of pain and sorrow hoping to break the curse of reincarnation but he hasn't worried about her since he arrived infact he's only mentioned home not her once. jellal was a wizard saint since you said he's gotten stronger I assume hes at the level of the 4 emperor's of ishgar meaning there's still the 12 sprigans who could wife him out after all 1 sprigan wipred out all 4 emperor's at once and I don't know if you only read fairytale but it has a sequel called 100 years quest and it turns out there's 5 other dragons as strong as acnologia in fact they even say the dragon god selene is even stronger. so you having him play bar keep while he doesn't even try to improve literally at all he hasn't developed in 150 chapters forget about him developing and growing as a character your still trying to make him reach his most natural and basic state that he already reached in his old world he's not even building a team to help him beat chaos at home which was the original plot point of this story. can you see why I'm saying all you've written since tenrou island is filler and just slice of life because it is the same as making a chapter of him going on a walk to the supermarket runs into burglars foils the robbery next chapter you add action but it's inconsequential to the actual story!!!!!!

  • aarana224 years ago
    Replied to ShayZero

    see you then good luck

  • aarana224 years ago
    Commented

    hey author you said the you wouldn't get to the end of the time skip till August or something right is it mid or late, because I'm not really a fan of slice of life genre so I'd rather just come back once your done with this filler stuff and the real story starts.

  • aarana224 years ago
    Commented

    chubby chaser I see, we all know that due to the Shinobi world gaining peace Mei and akino let themselves go and in under 10 years they became walking talking barrels of flesh but hey you like what you like

  • aarana224 years ago
    Commented

    adamantium chains will be affective against kaguyas clan when they invade nice

  • aarana224 years ago
    Commented

    again nothing to complain about by how fast you want to grow his strength obviously the title of the story ends with him as the strongest I'm just talking about having a village full of weakling or those talented who's talents were wasted and knowing a godlike alien RACE not one or two but all of the offspring with insane Bodies and power

  • aarana224 years ago
    Commented

    hey author I'ma be honest this fan fiction compared to other one's is alot better and I can see you have some type of plan. but again just being honest this story with the trajectory it's going even if one day you get him to kaguya level my friend that was only considered strong in Naruto, in Boruto there have been more than 3 characters who were stated to be beyond her and there's even several people who are super kage lvl so what I'm saying is. does his story knowledge only end at Naruto because he is not trying to raise talents even though a race of celestial alien gods are going to invade. each and every one of which is kage lvl at minimum with the innate ability to eat chakra and kimimaro possible one of the best anti otsosuki characters based purely on potential decided hey let him follow the plot till he gets sick and dies. also fine with the fact that only he and possibly Naruto and Sasuke who both lost in a 2v1 fight can challenge them. already animated BTW check it out.