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Another HP fanfic with a 'genius' mc. Badly written. Badly updated. Horrendous story development. Hilarious character design like for example the mc with an iq of 5. The HP world background is somehow worse with the existence of this fic.

Dumbledore is going to be tutoring the mc everyday for sure, the mc is a genius among geniuses. Author if you're not smart don't try to write wannabe smart characters.

Yup dumb as a doorknob.

Because he is not very smart, and without Potter to hold his hand the mc is useless.

Ah, yes the chuuni thinks he is better than everyone. Where have I seen that before...

What kind of person would write something so ***ed up? I really believe the author should see a doctor. .....................................

It's all right. The timeline is a little fucked as no matter what happens the years don't pass and the main character's cultivation does take the next step for hundreds of chapters. The world gets almost zero development and the development that it has doesn't make any logical sense. We don't know much of other characters other than the mc, and what we see is definitely one dimensional. The score is meant to represent the quality of work on this website.

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I am the first reader to notice the name. My disappointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined.

I don't want to leave a bad review so 4 stars. But I am extremely disappointed in this story the mc had the perfect villain backstory so when he actually started helping humanity I was actually socked to the point that the story stopped making sense to me. Dropped.