Hey there, I really liked this fan-fic and was hoping to hear from the author his on plans on will he continue writing about it.

You should try “ the rise of the black plains “ it too is a kingdom building and it’ pretty good

The grametical Translation needs to be futher improved.

Its a really great novel that is Intresting to read and one of the best empIre building novel out there But the translations need to be improved and the characters need more Back story Otherwise it would be a perfect novel.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

This Story has potential to be something really good but the author just went and ruined it, the world Backround is very bad where in the bignning 98.7 percent of the world dies but after that they keep dying due to zombies/monster or Or people and at the rate its going, in a month or two of Story time not Even 0.1 percent of the population will be left. The MC is also very bad as he is just the type of character that Goes on a killing streek for no apparent reason, there is no character developement as any character that comes in the mc’s life only gets a bit introduction and then their gone, Plus Its way to Overpowered as everyday he gets a new ability Or item of the highest grade SSS TIER while the rest of the people in the world struggle getting a rank c item. And the writing is bad too as in one chapter the mc reaches level 20 but After another couple of chapter it shows that Mc reached level 17. it confuses you As to why Is the auther doing this. Final remark, its a very rushed novel Like doing something that you like and you only give 10% of your best plus no Proper world background or character development. and mc way too overpowered and killing freek Which is not like other novel ruthless characters where they kill for a reason. this mc just kills Blindly and for some reason likes to rape others.

The novel is suprisingly good, with no grammar mistakes. but there is small problem when he shows up in his dragon as in the biggining, its says that due to super powers findong about black dragon they started to hunt and here we are as the protagonist of the story just doesnt care or is not worried about people finding about his dragon.

Its a good novel but the grammar errors ruins it, It makes the story less interesting and hard to read. So I would suggest that you should fix the grammar mistakes and it will be one hell of Novel.

You should fix your grammar