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You were correct to do so.I love to give writers the benefit of the doubt since I have tried it myself and know how frustrating it can get developing your world, but I also know how easy it is to write when you just gloss over everything and say good enough

Got curious and wanted to add author doesn’t know about incomplete detonation which occurs with the unrealistic amount of explosive he magically give the MC whenever the Mc needs to kill someone at a higher level really takes away from immersion just hypothetical here MC spend 6 months basically not cultivating but manages to make CPUs Chips and Explosives with one machining bench? But also note author stated he was cultivating during that time but didn’t mention at what stage he cultivated too mid late or peak 4th grade for example but we can assume he will drink tea and break through though right for the third time?

This is one of my more tame reviews because it wasn’t anything unique about the writing or good writing for that matter but I don’t think it deserves money from readers so felt the need to warn future readers before they invest too heavy and feel compelled to read slop in hope of it getting better

This was a fun little read until around chapter 150. Don’t waste your money—this is where I dropped it for a very simple reason: I don’t want to read about a cultivation world with modern weapons that are cheap to make. It’s not entertaining. You’re not the first author to try this, and it always ends up getting dropped. Only a very small niche group of readers would actually enjoy that kind of sloppy writing. The story also falls into a repetitive formula: the MC kills someone important with modern technology, then a random throwaway antagonist immediately shows up to take the blame, while the MC remains blissfully unaware. This cycle repeats literally every 24 chapters. I can’t recommend it. And when the author introduced a Gatling gun, I already knew he was out of ideas. From there, it was obvious the development wasn’t going anywhere meaningful. I hadn’t expected greatness from this story, just a fun little throwaway read—but I still felt compelled to warn others who might expect a well-done mix of modern technology and cultivation. It isn’t that. I don’t even want to imagine how flawed the logic would become once the MC reached Law Cultivation or Nascent Soul. The Gatling gun was the point I lost all interest and refused to keep reading.

I came back to see what would happen and what do yknow my theory was correct and now I ll see myself back out 3 chapters in and envelope really managed to make me drop this shit and crazy thing is a tv show was the reason I tried to give it another chance

I’m sorry for ranting but boar king never takes a loss even when his kids died we as readers barely knew them no chapters dedicated to them except the minor treasure one that will not die because they won’t kill him because guarntee after interrogation they will explain and grenha will probably vouch for him since that’s the type of guy he is

#Spoilers I will put it like this from the information gatherd this happen 32 years after major disaster 2 years from now they find orkha state of being a retard 3month from then they capture one of cuck kings body and son 2 years before major disaster boat king says it will take him years to rush there doesn’t specify but we can assume 2 years so writhin 4 years somehow cuck king is gonna have 40-50 intertial gravity’s b/c just plot and we all know how hard it is to birth a emerayan tusk so physically impossible for cuck king to achieve this let alone a tangible nature of life stage ten I won’t spoil more about the state of his bodies but let’s say main body can spam until 7 lifestage or more with current amount of resources but we know he will use those to maintain a 5th lifestage body whenever he dies so doesn’t matter just same repeat of every other fight

He’s “chasing” it already f”rozen” body is statue doesn’t mean death maybe I need to re read how petrified geese works because author implies she can still think during the frozen state but why split a body instead of blowing herself up instead of having her spirit container taken just flaws on flaws vhalla is old as dirt she not stupid but she make all these stupid mistakes for the sake of a cuck boar buff? She’s trapped in a sandy void where maroppa already secured at 20 miles that cuck long blocked off before entering. She’s not stalling anything second body spawn right beside her frozen body she doesn’t attempt to destroy but flee too many oversights that don’t make sense vhalla sisters just got wiped out they put their faiths in mystic paths they clearly don’t fear death but vhalla the strongest and most knowledgeable makes this basic mistake? Tell me where in the holy plot of a cuck king buff does this shit make sense I’ll just politely drop this novel and maybe in a couple years when I see it again I will dive back in but for now I’m going to politely take my money back to Supreme magus since I forgot about that novel and haven’t read it in 8+ years. If boar king earned the capture I wouldn’t be upset but nah a lot of stuff that happens in the future I just can’t agree with atm and would rather put the novel on hold than start to hate it

I just wasted my money on this? I will be putting this novel up from now on if this is what we are doing now holy cow

Nope re read the entire fight sequence never mentioned her splitting until this scene and even in this scene not mentioned it’s just there in text for what reason? Idk