trytwisted

next chapter please

TFTC need a bit of editing but good for the most part.

amazing chapter can't wait for the next one.

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TFTC amazing story keep it up

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p.s. only read up to chapter 20 hope it gets better but I just don't think the story's for me good luck to author

didn't enjoy the MC at all. First hzd fic I've read and was hoping for something more serious. not a bad story just not what I like . MC doesn't feel grounded in the world as if he is in sao but in hzd instead. all so found all his joking extremely boring and annoying just jokes no character expect to conquer the world or another bad joke.

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