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Leylin Farlier(Fang Yuan)(Wang Lin) are some of my favorite characters
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Really liked this story, author has some really good ideas. It's been 8 months since he last updated this fanfic. please author don't abandon the story, and please post updates & new chapters soon. The smallville universe is amazing, and your fanfic smallville universe is just as amazing. So I look forward to reading more of it. No pressure though. But please post more chapters!!
I've been checking your profile periodically hoping you would write a new story(s) & once again you didn't disappoint, even if this story is a one-shot, it's still a very good story, and very well written. I look forward to anymore stories you may publish in the future. I wish you would write many new stories, and you would Release them quicker. But I understand True Art takes Time, yet I hope that this review when read by the Author at least Motivated him enough that he is able to complete his next work/story 1 day sooner(or more) Anyway no pressure, keep up the good work, I enjoy all your stories & you are a great author. 5/5 Would Recommend(& I have high standards)
Fired Up! I love that Movie
*Resurrected
I wud definetly mind wipe & kill all my enemies so that if they R redirected or try 2 escape the afterlife or find & make a deal with an angel/god/demon then they can't even remember so that wudnt be possible as they wud start over with a complete clean slate & chance at a new life While being no threat to u in the future plus doing this is just helping the reincarnation cycle move along faster by wiping their memories first & it also insures that they don't keep their past life memories like in so many stories
no one noticed Drax b4 bcuz he was still enough 2 activate his invisibility power
I know that I was just hoping someone had meticulously collected each legend and put them all together in the right order, so I could read it from the beginning to the end(or latest one as the author hasn't finished his amazing story...yet...hopefully)
vampire Jamie, when he gives him to the dark maester
put the magical gem on a necklace or on your body(lightbringer with the gem seems to be about the Same strength without it)
I highly doubt a pureblood wizard child from England would know who Buddha is...
U always build in a failsafe so the weapon/tools you build can't be used against u
ppl or powerful entities like some magic user or demon or some gods could be spying on you
I hope he finds her later & deals with her & gets his money back & mindwipes her till she turns into a Pokemon that can only say her name over and over
it's a process, he couldn't just create a computer full of his memories first, he had to create the library of his own memories first and then Only could he create a computer and scanner to scan the books into the computer. Kinda like how the smartphone couldn't have been invented before the computer, or something like that. His mind couldn't create a working computer full of his memories, he had to get around that problem by making them books first then creating a scanner to upload them into an empty computer that only had an operating system on it.
Shameless Author Review. So far the story is great, has some good original ideas, also used ideas from other fanfics in his own way. The Update quality is so far so good. The grammar, sentence structure is fine, easy to read. So Far so good, and I like that it's set in the 1800's if it wasn't a Harry potter fanfic, it could be an original story about a reborn MC in a magic world in the 1800's. Yet being a Harry potter fanfic is better as its an established universe many people live and enjoy, like myself.
Alexander Dantes Is the fanfic, it also has a sequel The Riddle Coins. It can be found on fanfiction net or just Google it
he is a ghost in the machine(gaming capsule)