Just one chapter of this unedited pile of words was enough to give me a headache to last a week.

I feel like your comment more tells us what type of books you read instead...

I just started the story but am Enjoying it so far. just please get an editor. this book has so much potential, but quality drops because it is not edited properly.

The idea behind the story is cool. I can’t tell if this is an Englished based author or a translated story because the writing isn’t very good. getting an editor to go through the story would Bring up the quality a lot. Worth a try if you can ignore bad english.