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Kheinz

Kheinz

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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz14d
    Commented

    Sad we didn’t have this scene 😭

    As he said that lighting cracked around Zapdos as he sent a [Thunderbolt] directly toward Moltres.
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    Pokemon: Radical Redux
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz21d
    Commented

    Hmm

    -Demeter's Underwear(D)
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz21d
    Commented
    "...huh?" (Himeko&Welt)
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    Ultimate Herrsher in DxD
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz1mth
    Replied to JadeAndConstlation

    Is it really worth ? I stopped at 300-400 because I wanted to stack until he leaves on his adventure but now I’m having a hard time to start again

    *As our protagonist did that, a little pink Pokemon that likes to take residency in pallet town, looked at him, and became interested, as the little mouse-like Pokemon flew away.*
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    Pokemon: Radical Redux
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz1mth
    Commented

    +1

    4) MC will have a different race and his powers will focus on the race of choice.
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz1mth
    Commented

    I came from the motohama fic and seing no update on it I left it aside to wait for new chapters thinking you went on hiatus and one day I randomly clicked on it to find it gone. Then I checked your profile and found this fic so unless I missed an update before the snap, a chapter explaining the rewrite and the new fic would have made me read it way earlier. Anyway love the fic, I like multiverse chat but few are good or update frequently but yours is interesting I love to see different sides of characters and the one you chose are not common so keep at it 👍 adding the # jujutsu and one piece might help ? I know if I found this fic when searching for these tags I would not be disappointed and on that note adding the chat members in the synopsis of your fic would help people not associating it to run of the mill main characters or waifu chat group. A little rant but Bang and Megumin are kinda looking like cardboard characters rn I think you’re planning for them to have an arc like nami and yuji but them having a little pov on the group chat earlier would have helped with humanizing? them. Bang is old and have a ton of experience but he does nothing with it and just goes with everything. We didn’t see him questioning the system and even the little training in martial art was not done when they had days on the boat (mc should also know that yuji throws hands so he should have made the connection with bang and yuji more). And megumin just seems to be there like a happy in fairy tail 😂 you don’t know what it is but it’s here so it’s normal. Tldr : them having a little character building or their reactions with how they think would have been welcomed and they wouldn’t feel like accessories to the story. Some interlude with the life of the chat members and the influence of the chat with their lives could be good That’s all till now your fic is worth reading and good so keep at it 👍

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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz1mth
    Commented

    Maybe I tuned it out but I don’t recall seeing ads for the p*treon so I didn’t know you had one 😅

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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz1mth
    Commented

    More like braindead scott 💀

    Stubborn Scott
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz2mth
    Commented

    +1

    - Tony Stark
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz2mth
    Commented

    +1

    - Jean Grey [Phoenix]
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz2mth
    Replied to SKAJ

    Harry didn’t realize he was talking parseltongue when he did at first, to him it sounded like english with a hiss so not surprising he has no idea how to speak it

    'It is as I feared. I don't possess the parseltongue ability anymore.'
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    Harry Potter: Another Chance
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz3mth
    Commented

    I think they’re waiting for the rewrite to get to the mcu or they’re waiting for a dozen chapters to read it all in one shot

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    Marvel: Reborn As Gilgamesh
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz4mth
    Commented
    "Heh!"
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    Fate/Roulette
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz4mth
    Commented

    +1

    2. Avengers fic
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    Solo Levelling: Perception
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz4mth
    Replied to Yachii_

    I would rather have a chance of being eaten alive by a giant spider than be harassed 24/7 by friking mosquitos man

    Everyone quickly slept through the night with nothing important happening, it made Shuichi realise that there were no mosquitoes or other pests in this world. Pokémon made them extinct.
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    Pokémon: Journey towards dreams
    Anime & Comics · AnAccountant
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz4mth
    Replied to Arron_Fleming
    Claire then put a hand over the back of Cid's hair and pulled him in closer getting more and more passionate with each second.
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    The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz4mth
    Replied to BoredLad

    A rubber room with rats…

    I beat that part of myself to sleep; it was tame and almost silent these days, but since I experienced Dual Cultivation after so long, it peeked out looking for trouble. Sadly, I didn't have any reason to let the Crazy Demon talk shit in my head. I was crazy once, but now I am doing fine. I think. No reason to change that.
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    Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
    Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz4mth
    Commented

    A manly name.

    [Replied by BrutalUwUKnight:
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    Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz5mth
    Commented
    Gasper smiled underneath the musk and nodded his head. Millicas smiles and Kiba behinds them to feel pity for Gasper when he sees Millicas smiling by showing all of his teeth.
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    Avatar System
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  • Kheinz
    Kheinz6mth
    Commented
    "*Purrr* Ok but keep doing that! *Purrr*"- I love this cat. She went from berserker to spoiled in less than 3 seconds. I turned my attention back to the mutants and said:
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    Dragon in Marvel
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