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Kheinz2dCommented"Mew." - đż
As for Mew, it made its way to Pewter City along with us and found the way to the gym. As the Pewter Gym building was mostly comprised of gray stone and granite, Mew plopped down on the roof undetected and transformed into a piece of stone. Mew let out a light giggle, only for it to no longer move from that spot. Mew became a rock.- Kheinz2dCommented
Someone is asking for your location
"Mmm. Indeed the Minamoto Clan. They were one of the four retainer families, who eventually founded the Kamakura Shogunate in ancient Japan during the Heian Period. They do go by the name Genji too. Though looking at your family tree here, I do not see anyone with a surname for Genji. It is unfortunate to say, but you are not royalty." - Kheinz3dCommentedI was literally watching his young master antics with an unamused attitude. Keeping my silence, I readied myself as the blonde idiot charging at me. As soon as he is within my reach, with a flurry of motion, I unleashed a barrage of strikesâfist to the solar plexus, palm to the ear, foot to the knee, I was beating the shit out of him just like what Master Ip Man would do to his enemy with a magnificent speed and precision.Â
- Kheinz8dCommented
Psyduck :
But Ash bribed them all with what they wanted, Machamp more training, Abra food, and PsyduckâŠ. Well, Psyduck just kinda agreed. - Kheinz21dCommented"Do you yield?" Harry asked, twisting her hands.
- Kheinz23dCommentedTheo helps Hades up, puts his hand on his shoulder, and smiles.
- Kheinz1mthCommented
The next ballon having child I see should ask god why he put him in my way.
"On the contrary, Mito-sama. I taught that girl a valuable lesson. She now understands that life will hand her shit to deal with even when she is doing nothing. Just to drive in the point, I laughed at her while she cried." - Kheinz1mthCommented
Sad we didnât have this scene đ
As he said that lighting cracked around Zapdos as he sent a [Thunderbolt] directly toward Moltres. - Kheinz1mthCommented
Hmm
-Demeter's Underwear(D) - Kheinz2mthReplied to JadeAndConstlation
Is it really worth ? I stopped at 300-400 because I wanted to stack until he leaves on his adventure but now Iâm having a hard time to start again
*As our protagonist did that, a little pink Pokemon that likes to take residency in pallet town, looked at him, and became interested, as the little mouse-like Pokemon flew away.* - Kheinz2mthCommented
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4) MC will have a different race and his powers will focus on the race of choice. - Kheinz2mthCommented
I came from the motohama fic and seing no update on it I left it aside to wait for new chapters thinking you went on hiatus and one day I randomly clicked on it to find it gone. Then I checked your profile and found this fic so unless I missed an update before the snap, a chapter explaining the rewrite and the new fic would have made me read it way earlier. Anyway love the fic, I like multiverse chat but few are good or update frequently but yours is interesting I love to see different sides of characters and the one you chose are not common so keep at it đ adding the # jujutsu and one piece might help ? I know if I found this fic when searching for these tags I would not be disappointed and on that note adding the chat members in the synopsis of your fic would help people not associating it to run of the mill main characters or waifu chat group. A little rant but Bang and Megumin are kinda looking like cardboard characters rn I think youâre planning for them to have an arc like nami and yuji but them having a little pov on the group chat earlier would have helped with humanizing? them. Bang is old and have a ton of experience but he does nothing with it and just goes with everything. We didnât see him questioning the system and even the little training in martial art was not done when they had days on the boat (mc should also know that yuji throws hands so he should have made the connection with bang and yuji more). And megumin just seems to be there like a happy in fairy tail đ you donât know what it is but itâs here so itâs normal. Tldr : them having a little character building or their reactions with how they think would have been welcomed and they wouldnât feel like accessories to the story. Some interlude with the life of the chat members and the influence of the chat with their lives could be good Thatâs all till now your fic is worth reading and good so keep at it đ
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Maybe I tuned it out but I donât recall seeing ads for the p*treon so I didnât know you had one đ
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More like braindead scott đ
Stubborn Scott - Kheinz3mthCommented
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This book has been deleted. - Kheinz4mthReplied to SKAJ
Harry didnât realize he was talking parseltongue when he did at first, to him it sounded like english with a hiss so not surprising he has no idea how to speak it
'It is as I feared. I don't possess the parseltongue ability anymore.' - Kheinz4mthCommented
I think theyâre waiting for the rewrite to get to the mcu or theyâre waiting for a dozen chapters to read it all in one shot
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